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If my MC didn't run through a specific random path through a labyrinth in a dream, the multiverse would eventually be consumed by an...

I for one would appreciate the free proofreading and the comments for algorithm boosts.

Woops, I didn't realize copying was disabled, I'll have to fix that. Hmm, if the double-body thing is the most interesting part of the...

Oh no! You disabled copy and paste. How am I going to quote you now? Anyway. Reincarnated into two female bodies? The premise sounds...

It feels like every other chapter I write, I have to go back and change something in a previous chapter. One time I got the day of the...

I've been editing these endlessly for the past couple weeks, and need an excuse to do even more endless editing. Also haven't figured...

It's somewhat lacking in formatting options, but other than that I'm satisfied. I get to write on both my computer and phone and...

I think it's specifically the middle paragraph of the synopsis. I might try to find a way to completely rewrite that later.

Deep POV theory is extremely helpful, thank you!

Well, immersion isn't about how the MC thinks. It's about making the reader feel like the MC. You're free to explain the MC's thoughts...

Does something like this sound better? "It’s odd that the dream changed him into not one, but two girls. And the newly-named Rayna and...

Well, I position myself as a casual reader who just happened to pass by and read it once to gauge immersion. My brief impression is...

Hmm. Gotcha. I feel like it'd be a much easier read if you named the two girls immediately: That way it's easier to associate the...

It's kind of a weird situation where Rayna and Lillian each have their own personality but they both still share the same mind, so the...

So I got the idea of waiting to finish writing the entire first book of my story before I start posting it publicly, so I can keep a...