Recent content by Beeteetee

I'm good with premises but not of plot, conversation nor character - the important parts of a story.

I'm assuming it's opening the novel up to be contributed on by others, it reads like someone saying, "use my idea since I'm burned out." I could be wrong. It is also unfamiliar to me and I'm guessing by context.

If you got time - I would recommend you to actually do both. Only make a reference that it's written by the same author. For example, CasualFarmer did this with Beware of Chicken and Soaring Heaven's Isle - The author referred to it as alternate universe.

There are health conditions that can also induce hallucinations - diabetes, badly manufactured medications (depending on country), heavy metal poisoning (depending on country), brain conditions like a tumor or Parkinson's, cross interactions of medications and/or going under/over dosage of...

you you should meet my grandmother, I think the show golden girls gave her inspiration so many years ago to not give any care to anyone else's critique. This was after my grandfather passed so, it does happen - and frankly, it is normal to regress to ... more juvenile state as one reaches a...

Harem - I liked the idea and the variety of the cast but eventually, I noticed there's no way to do a harem without either having a spineless MC trying not to offend any of his girls or the girls force new members on him as a way of sharing the wealth (weird, I know.) And just to keep the story...

I sat in court, waiting for my turn to speak with the judge as part of the sentencing process. In the past months, the DA wasn't really helpful on letting me know what was going on with court cases of my brother's murder. Since the accused was minors, I wasn't given any details. When I tried to...

That is probably the best argument I've ever read for a matriarchal monarchy.

I use the aspects I dislike as a foil of criticism and a conflict that drives the plot. Let's take slavery - MC buys a mine that is notorious for slavery use and individually the operations of the mine to demonstrate the purpose of freemen, that people that has a future has a drive to improve...

You'd be on how many people wants something for low effort / next to nothing. The hollowness of their achievements goes way over their insipid heads because one would have to be stupid to believe that things come without costs in the first place.

I've thought of a version similar to this, basically a wandering fallen god with his divinity stolen the moment he was ascended and banished beyond his original universe as a way to hide the thief's crime because it's basically a very heinous crime in the pantheon, a murder of a god. He...

What about an ancient tome? The tome only answers to the bound owner and only one owner at a time, the pages blank for each new owner, the book still has knowledge of everything written in it. Naturally, that tome had a history of owners being murdered and eventually secreted away in paranoia...

I haven't done the entire chapter but I did find minor grammar things here and there. Not to worry, most writers would prefer the grammar to be left to the editors since it tends to staccato the creative writing. here's some of the grammar notes so far --- She nodded. For the first time in a...

how exactly does viruses affect weather? Wait. Are we talking about fanfic on the mcbride's Viral Apocalypse series?

huh I had no idea on that. TIL.