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Dude/sis... I'll be honest with you. It's not about taste, it's about how you visualize the scene from the first POV. As a reader, I...

Hello, thank you so much for taking the time to read through my story, I really appreciate the detailed feedback. I’m glad the...

Read through it and I'll just give you a brief touch on each of your points: Characterization - Obviously the strongest aspect. Not...

I’m excited to get to that part too. When you let your moments breathe, they’re genuinely great, those scenes are what show me how...

Hello, thanks for taking the time to look it over and give feedback even if it wasn't your cup of tea.

Hello again, I read chapters 3 and 4 and wanted to share some more thoughts. First, I want to say that I am enjoying the book. I don’t...

I don't have strong feelings either way, but good on you for re-evaluating a stance based on new information instead of just doubling down.

Since you're bored I'd love feedback on my story. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2207000/in-the-seals-shadow/

Hello, I’m up for a feedback exchange. I read the first chapter to start, and there’s a lot here that works. The atmosphere is strong...

Were you looking for feedback on book two specifically? Or would you be ok if I started with book 1?

I enjoy this. For me it's an exploration into the minds of others. In real life we have plenty of people who commit crimes, yet I don't...

I read the first two chapters, I'm enjoying it so far and will keep reading during my limited free time which is scarce so your book...

lol, well nothing can be done then. Should you find an extra minute later the offer will stand.

Hello, I’d really appreciate it if you could take a few moments to check out my story. The first few chapters are pretty short, so if...

I loved it! Literally I loved it so much that initially I went in to read the 3 chapters, and then it piqued my interest so well that I...