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    Writing What type of characters do you enjoy in Romance WNs?

    Why is GB so popular here? I'm genuinely curious
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    Thank you so much! I completely understand where you're coming from, and 100% get why you wouldn't want to read on. I appreciate the compliments on my writing style and I will ensure I focus on fixing more of the conceptual stuff (IE elevating it from teen angst to something more impactful). I...
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    Writing What type of characters do you enjoy in Romance WNs?

    I was hoping to write a Romance webnovel, however before I started, I wanted to gauge which types of characters people most enjoy reading. Although I understand the best characters always have depth and cannot be reduced to a singular trope, there are certain sets of personality traits that...
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    Feedback Wanted!

    Understood; thank you so much for the feedback; I think I need to rework the initial moments of the MC, or at least describe his initial reaction a lot better, so I really appreciate the guidance ^_^
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    Feedback Wanted!

    Thank you so much for the advice! I'll add that right away and try to fix paragraphs, and then attempt to rework the introduction when I have time. I really appreciate the feedback
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    Feedback Wanted!

    Thank you, I appreciate that ^_^ I will do my best to eliminate tense errors as soon as possible, and thanks for the suggestion with the space!
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    Feedback Wanted!

    So, this is my first attempt at writing a Webnovel or anything like that and I was hoping someone would be able to provide feedback. I don't mind how brutal/mean the feedback is, anything which could help me is greatly appreciated ^_^ I got a 1-star rating without any feedback so I wanted to...
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    Hey, if you're still doing it, I would appreciate it for this ^_^ https://www.scribblehub.com/read/314108-the-summoning-of-the-sun-king/chapter/314110/
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