I've read a bit more, finished Arc 1. First of all, no amount of threats or bribes will make me read more. Your story is simply not my cup of tea. Secondly, as I've predicted, I saw no incomprehensible stuff, weird sentences, or mistakes apart from one typo. A housand burning metal needles were driven through

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