Recent content by Arilia

In one of my D&D settings dragons are like Fusions from Stephen Universe: multiple people sharing one body. The planet is billions of people travelling together through the cosmos, so I realized the entire world is basically one dragon. This meta-being can manifest an avatar to interact with...

Lol yeah but at the very least I can shift my new chapters a bit. I'm thinking one every 42 hours, instead of every 48 hours.

That's a great and obvious idea, thank you. Sometimes I'm so blind.

Thank you for pointing out the pacing issue! I'll think it over, and see what I can do to rewrite the opening.

Oh yeah, I did my timezone math wrong. Maybe 9am PST on Saturday would be better for the European crowd? I dunno.

I mostly have experience writing romance/smut, not action or drama, so I'd love to hear any thoughts you have about this chapter! Refuge 2.1: Beginning of the End This occurs after the characters were introduced in earlier chapters, but that probably won't be necessary to understand what's...

That's true, some people might work on weekends. Still, I figure that's a good time to post for the European audience too, since 7am Pacific is afternoon in Europe?

I'm writing a story with romance, smut, and tragedy, set on Earth. Mostly realistic sexy stuff, no magic or game systems. How can I figure out when good timing for that audience might be? Currently I'm publishing at 5pm PST Tues/Thurs, and 7am PST Sat/Sun. I have no idea if that's working well...

Thank you so much for reading! I guess my original instincts were better. I took the exposition back out, and will try to find a ways to work in more excitement. Thanks! This is really helpful!

First impressions are important, so I decided to revisit and edit the first chapter in my story. I would greatly appreciate any feedback you can provide! This involves awkward sexual exploration between a neurodivergent intersex person and her childhood best friend. It starts tame, but gets a...

For anyone using Google docs, check out the new Tabs feature. It lets you organize and rearrange your chapters! This was all I really needed. https://support.google.com/docs/answer/15499791?hl=en&co=GENIE.Platform%3DDesktop

There's lots of word fetishes out there, but I've never actually met anyone interested in exotic ones like vore or whatever. The most common "fetish" people want is D/s play. The weirdest fetish I have is polyamory. It sounds vanilla, but it's really not. Many people SAY they are poly. I'm a...