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Hello my dearly beloved, or whoever you all are anyway, as a matter of fact, this Thread has already existed before, but since my...

Quack.

[reading a book in first person] hmm, i dont remember doing any of this

I ran a similar thread before, but I eventually likened all my feedback to reading a story for the sake of answering questions for a...

Solid 4/10 ragebait. Would definitely work on the new players in the glorious sport that is rage baiting. Would recommend more words to...

Do you want me to review you? Because I see no links. And don’t ask a brain-rot low-attention-span mobile user like me to look for it...

Hey everyone! My story Sparrow Flight is a fusion between writing and comics, so here's the first few pages of its first comic. The...

If we liked the first several chapters, we'll continue reading as long as progress is steadily being made, and the story is...

Went to uni for the first time in like, a week

It’s kinda funny how it all just comes down to immersion. The moment something starts feeling forced or repetitive, you just… lose...

Not gunna lie, kinda bashful about sharing my work heh :sweat_smile: but I can't expand or improve by living in a bubble. This is the...

It's quite good! A bit on the long side. The only part I maybe didn't like was the voices "from the stands" interrupting the action to...

I only see one msg from them which is even weirder than spamming

Not requesting a review, just thanking u for the community service. The feedback you're giving here is pure gold, and a joy to read...

You know how this reads to me, don’t you? But fine. If you want feedback, I’ll give you a brief one: -Cut down the melodrama. There is...