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I am screenshotting this.

How did you know I am arabic?

This is by far, the simplest comprehensible presentation of how people should write comedy. I'll be keeping this in my google docs...

You just summed the core theme, thank you! :blobrofl: Diaries only tell you what the person WANTS to write down. It's only up to them...

Actually enjoyed it. Pretty unique style with the diary entries. The only thing that's hard to accept is that you only get told a tiny...

Eldoria, I'm sorry. I have to bully you a little bit. I find it hilarious you made this inspirational-advice post, clearly in reference...

Don't treat your world as a static object that's observed. Make it alive, like an organism, interacting with your characters. Let the...

I do like the comedy presented here. A wee lad giving advice on comedy, written in a way that reads like you gave chatgpt a prompt. I...

GIB ME MEMES OR GIB ME DEATH. cause there is no joy without the funny ha-has.

Well, your way is correct too, but I was just offering a manual on how to write funny scenes to make your work easier.

I appreciate the feedback, but my review of your review is that you are giving me advice on how to write a normal story, an immersive...

Okay, after reading six chapters in one sitting without rereading—purely to measure immersion as a casual reader—I’m fairly confident...

Looks at my own, purposefully written diary-style novel :blob_shock:

Get a load of this guy. ? He thinks authors or translators know how to read.

All this 'translation' drama would've been largely avoided, if only people would read/get to know site rules first, before dumping stuff.