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just look at those humps... yep, it's got curves in all the right places... -JayMark, probably -
AliceMoonvale reacted to babywrath's post in the thread Feedback request on my Isekai Harem fantasy adventure with
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The blue mage is 5'4" or 5'6" I think while MC is 6'6" which is just average for knights and warriors who are anywhere from 6'4" to... -
AliceMoonvale reacted to babywrath's post in the thread Feedback request on my Isekai Harem fantasy adventure with Sad.
I do post to multiple platforms, and funnily enough, I have the most reader retention on SH. RR only has 45 followers, WN only has 55...
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AliceMoonvale replied to the thread Grass Supremacy Thread.
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Don't call me a retard, retard!
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AliceMoonvale replied to the thread Is anyone else addicted to the Ranking?.I am definitely aiming for a future rating of #69 in cannibalism in my zombie story.
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AliceMoonvale replied to the thread Feedback request on my Isekai Harem fantasy adventure.Should work on the hook, something for readers to latch onto so retention doesn't fall off after the first handful of chapters. And...
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AliceMoonvale commented on AliceMoonvale's profile post.We need more educated retards like us.
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The people that say these things are not even midwits. They're less than that. Sure, you could do an experiment to see if there is less...
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AliceMoonvale reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread Feedback request on my Isekai Harem fantasy adventure with Like.
Well, I don't know where you're publishing your fiction... but whether readers find a hook isn't just about a well-written narrative...
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AliceMoonvale replied to the thread Grass Supremacy Thread.
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AliceMoonvale reacted to pangmida's post in the thread just an amateur artist trying to make her own illustrations with Love.
I've obtained some new brushes, thanks to ZannaYO! :D Drew the three siblings to test them. So far, I really like them! Very fun to use...
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In theory, everything looks great, however, there’s rlly nothing that piqued my interest. No hook. Check for that
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Your synopsis still contains unnecessary infodump to make readers care. Furthermore, the personal stakes are only implied, making it...
