Reviews for the Folks.

[Sii]

All right folks, this is my first time doing this so bear with me.

I am offering reviews for your stories, can be in progress or completed. If you have a lot of chapters, I'll give it a good go, at least 10 chapters so I can properly form an opinion. I won't read all the way through, for the sake of time and because I also have a day job that takes up most of my time.

I will offer feedback, as far as what I liked/disliked and what I thought worked really well in your favor.
I'll steer clear of offering any feedback on style choices and general grammar unless that's something you'd like me to keep in mind for you.
If I don't think I have anything to offer in a review, I'd be happy to DM it to you. I'm not a mean person and I don't think it's productive to go around leaving scathing reviews on other authors works. If you still want me to post it in your reviews then I can.

Since I've never offered reviews for others I don't know what my turn around time is gonna be, so bear with me. I've only written a few reviews on RR so I'm using this as a chance to enhance myself as an objective reviewer.
I'll treat this as a first come, first served thing and I'll update with the list as I go along.

I will say that I'm not asking for anything in return, if you want to check out my story it'll be linked in my sig. But it's not a requirement that you do, I'm just here offering reviews for my fellow authors.

Current reading list-
- Saileri: I Own A Brothel In Another World - Reviewed
- Assurbanipal: Schwarz is my destiny - Reviewed
- Romance: New Return of the Condor Heroes - Reviewed
- TachimeSan: Aim to be a Noblewoman's Butler - Reviewed
- LostLibrarian: The Lone Macaw - Reviewed
- Tejoka: Reverse Reincarnation - Reviewed
- ConTroll: The Terran Traveler - Reviewed
- K5Rakitan: Kaiba's Prostitute - Reviewed
- HURGMCGURG: Stone Man
- sushirollw: The Tyrant Duchess
- KyoruS: Lord of The Ancient
- Draculus: Masquerade of Souls
- HansTrondheim: The Human Saint is Bored
- SparkNorkx: Star Ghost Isekai Agency
- Redbow112: Ragnarok in Another World
- Moonpearl: Muirgen & Other Tales
- Vickusoftears: Resurrection: I died and came back as a 3000 year old vampire!
- BenJepheneT: Caninstinct
- cc.mscreeps18: Warfare Between Lost Hearts
- UYScuti: Stellar Winds
- Nerothemajin: F:Ran
- Pyris_Silver: Avenger of Destruction
- Senpai_Chan: Reaching Zenith
- LazyPanda: Reborn as a Symbiote

 

[Saileri]

My worldbuilding prologue ends after chapter 9, with 10 being the first of the main premise taking over, so I guess I'll give you a notif then. There are 7 currently released and it's weekly so in 2 weeks or so. I'm kinda curious about what you would say since my style is kinda wordy and it's a slow slice of life series. And you don't have to worry if you don't like smuts, there's no explicit content in the prologue.

So yeah, till that day.

 

[Assurbanipal_II]

Click on the banners below to access the story of your choice.

 

[Romance_Wuxia_Modern_genre]

Story Name: New Return of the Condor Heroes 2006



Synopsis
A Romance Adventure Love Story that combines the Return of the Condor Heroes 2006 TV Series with the Qin's Moon Chinese Animation Series.

The story focuses on the Mohist School who rebels against the Great Qin Empire that had conquered the 7 States at this time and had united all of China into one big state. The story also tells about the rivalry between two disciples of the same sect and their different paths that they will choose in life which will determine even the fates of the Kings. Within all of these chaos also appeared two lovers who's love, they would not let the world around them or others interfere with.

Link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/147877/new-return-of-the-condor-heroes-/

 

[Sii]

My worldbuilding prologue ends after chapter 9, with 10 being the first of the main premise taking over, so I guess I'll give you a notif then. There are 7 currently released and it's weekly so in 2 weeks or so. I'm kinda curious about what you would say since my style is kinda wordy and it's a slow slice of life series. And you don't have to worry if you don't like smuts, there's no explicit content in the prologue.

So yeah, till that day.

No problem, I'll give yours a read and if I don't feel like a review would be appropriate I'll put it on the back burner and review it once you have more chapters out.

Click on the banners below to access the story of your choice.

I'll check out Schwarz and I'll leave my review.

Story Name: New Return of the Condor Heroes 2006

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Synopsis
A Romance Adventure Love Story that combines the Return of the Condor Heroes 2006 TV Series with the Qin's Moon Chinese Animation Series.

The story focuses on the Mohist School who rebels against the Great Qin Empire that had conquered the 7 States at this time and had united all of China into one big state. The story also tells about the rivalry between two disciples of the same sect and their different paths that they will choose in life which will determine even the fates of the Kings. Within all of these chaos also appeared two lovers who's love, they would not let the world around them or others interfere with.

Link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/147877/new-return-of-the-condor-heroes-/

I've added yours to my list as well. Depending on how busy I get throughout the week, I should be able to get all 3 of your reviews done by the weekend.

 

[TachimeSan]

If the offer still stands ? I wouldn't mind getting a review.

Transmigrated Into Another World: Aim to be the Noblewoman’s Butler

A fast-paced fantasy Isekai story that deals with politics, romance, wars, and conspiracies. Follow the story of Larc, a personal butler (pet?) of a young noble girl, as he deals with various problems and tries to stay away from further trouble, all the while trying to stay alive in this...

www.scribblehub.com

Thanks in advance OP Sama!

 

[Sii]

If the offer still stands ? I wouldn't mind getting a review.

Transmigrated Into Another World: Aim to be the Noblewoman’s Butler

A fast-paced fantasy Isekai story that deals with politics, romance, wars, and conspiracies. Follow the story of Larc, a personal butler (pet?) of a young noble girl, as he deals with various problems and tries to stay away from further trouble, all the while trying to stay alive in this...

www.scribblehub.com

Thanks in advance OP Sama!

Got you. I'll add you to the queue.

 

[LostLibrarian]

I mean everyone loves to gets some feedback
Would love to read some thoughts... first Interlude as breaking point is after 12 chapters.

The Lone Macaw

The moment the dying Aki opens his eyes, he is shocked. Not his hospice room but green meadows, blue sky and the villages of his favorite MMO await him. A fever dream? Or a new lease of life? To Aki it’s a chance to correct the story line he...

www.scribblehub.com

 

[Saileri]

No problem, I'll give yours a read and if I don't feel like a review would be appropriate I'll put it on the back burner and review it once you have more chapters out.

Thanks, have fun!

 

[Tejoka]

I'd also love to get a review, feedback is always appreciated!
My story: Reverse Reincarnation
It has 25 chapters right now, read as many as you like. Thank you!

 

[ConTroll]

My Story: The Terran Traveller

Your honest opinion would be greatly appreciated.

 

[RepresentingCaution]

Sounds great! The link to mine is in my signature ?

 

[HURGMCGURG]

Any of the stories in my signature. The one I'm editing for isn't at ten chapters yet, but will be in a few days. Thanks for the offer, bruv.

 

[Sii]

I mean everyone loves to gets some feedback
Would love to read some thoughts... first Interlude as breaking point is after 12 chapters.

The Lone Macaw

The moment the dying Aki opens his eyes, he is shocked. Not his hospice room but green meadows, blue sky and the villages of his favorite MMO await him. A fever dream? Or a new lease of life? To Aki it’s a chance to correct the story line he...

www.scribblehub.com

I'd also love to get a review, feedback is always appreciated!
My story: Reverse Reincarnation
It has 25 chapters right now, read as many as you like. Thank you!

My Story: The Terran Traveller

Your honest opinion would be greatly appreciated.

Sounds great! The link to mine is in my signature ?

Any of the stories in my signature. The one I'm editing for isn't at ten chapters yet, but will be in a few days. Thanks for the offer, bruv.

All right, I'll go ahead and add all of you. I'm gonna edit my original post and put in a list so you all know the order I'll be working through.

 

[Sushirollw]

Well, here's mine. I hope you like my writing style.
It's only 4 chapters, including the prologue.

The Tyrant Duchess

THIS STORY WILL BE ADAPTED INTO A WEBTOON. But in the Webtoon, there will be a change of about 40% of the story in this 'published web-novel'. The story and Cover are created and owned by SushirollW. If you found another similar story/cover on another platform; outside Scribblehub, that is...

www.scribblehub.com

 

[KyoruS]

Would love to get any kind of reviews and feedback in my story too. I'm especially looking for how the story goes, its pacing and tension.

Its currently 15 chapters in and hasn't even touched the meatier part of the story.

Lord of the Ancient

 

[Draculus-del-Viafat]

I hope it counts if I ask you for a review for these nine chapters of MoS that are already done? Sorry for that it has to be another website, but I really need an opinion) If you have free time and inspiration, please, check them out. Thank you) You can send me a private message on SH as you finish, or leave a feedback below any of my chapters here or on YWS.
Masquerade of Souls on Young Writers' Society.
MoS on Wattpad in case YWS doesn't work

 

[Deleted member 29316]

If you got time to spare, please do check out mine as well! My story currently has 43 chapters and counting. It's in my sig. Thanks!

 

[SparkNorkx]

If you can add more to your queue, I would like you to check mine too.

Star Ghost Isekai Agency

18-year-old journalist Leilani Hikaru returns to Tokyo from her Hawaii trip. When she crosses the street late that night, a truck rams her to death. After the accident, she wakes up as a half-cyborg in a fantasy world and now works for a special isekai agency called Star Ghost. Can...

www.scribblehub.com

 

[Sii]

Well, here's mine. I hope you like my writing style.
It's only 4 chapters, including the prologue.

The Tyrant Duchess

THIS STORY WILL BE ADAPTED INTO A WEBTOON. But in the Webtoon, there will be a change of about 40% of the story in this 'published web-novel'. The story and Cover are created and owned by SushirollW. If you found another similar story/cover on another platform; outside Scribblehub, that is...

www.scribblehub.com

Would love to get any kind of reviews and feedback in my story too. I'm especially looking for how the story goes, its pacing and tension.

Its currently 15 chapters in and hasn't even touched the meatier part of the story.

Lord of the Ancient

I hope it counts if I ask you for a review for these nine chapters of MoS that are already done? Sorry for that it has to be another website, but I really need an opinion) If you have free time and inspiration, please, check them out. Thank you) You can send me a private message on SH as you finish, or leave a feedback below any of my chapters here or on YWS.
Masquerade of Souls on Young Writers' Society.

If you got time to spare, please do check out mine as well! My story currently has 43 chapters and counting. It's in my sig. Thanks!

If you can add more to your queue, I would like you to check mine too.

Star Ghost Isekai Agency

18-year-old journalist Leilani Hikaru returns to Tokyo from her Hawaii trip. When she crosses the street late that night, a truck rams her to death. After the accident, she wakes up as a half-cyborg in a fantasy world and now works for a special isekai agency called Star Ghost. Can...

www.scribblehub.com

All right, I'll go ahead and add you folks. My queue has gotten longer now but I'll work through it, so do be patient with me. I promise I'll get to everyone lol.