Rate my first book and a feedback: Trials of the Constellation

[ElysPencil]

Hi! I'm ElysPencil and I write my first book as a hobby. Looking for willing people to review my first book. It's messy as I'm discovery writing so forgive the messiness!

Trials of the Constellation

Christopher died saving someone. He expected nothing but a grim reaper or his soul ascending to heaven or descending to hell but it's not. He was allowed to reincarnate and he unexpectedly join a massive god competition as a Constellation. --- Updating is very slow as I only do this...

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[ElysPencil]

Chapter 7 posted

 

[ElysPencil]

Chapter 8 posted

 

[ElysPencil]

Chapter 9 posted

 

[FRWriter]

This is a feedback thread, not an Update thread. If you want to post Updates or discuss the story, check out the Reader section, though honestly, this Forum is not really suitable for advertising.

I'll give it a read when I have some time, but after reading the first chapter, it's neither outright boring nor badly written. Since it's also not AI, I have to say it's better than a lot of other stories already.

However, there are countless errors in it... use Grammarly, use a spell checker, use whatever, but use SOMETHING.

 

[ElysPencil]

Ah my bad

 

[dayses]

This is a feedback thread, not an Update thread. If you want to post Updates or discuss the story, check out the Reader section, though honestly, this Forum is not really suitable for advertising.

I'll give it a read when I have some time, but after reading the first chapter, it's neither outright boring nor badly written. Since it's also not AI, I have to say it's better than a lot of other stories already.

However, there are countless errors in it... use Grammarly, use a spell checker, use whatever, but use SOMETHING.

use something is quite the advice indeed lol

 

[FRWriter]

use something is quite the advice indeed lol

There are like thousands of programs capable of detecting spelling mistakes. He can use whatever online tool, site, writing program, or AI helper, I don't care.

He just needs to pick one.