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[FrenzyWanderer]

I refuse to level up! (Don’t ask about my sister’s opinion on this) | Royal Road

What would any normal person do after they isekai'ed to another world? Well that shouldn't even be a question. Grind up levels, become strong and conquer the world with overpowered cheat abilities. But Ren isn't that kind of "Normal" What if he conquers the world without levelling up? without...

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This is my story

3 chapters are up! 4th will follow soon

Can anyone review my story upto now?

 

[Makimaam]

Just a question. Have you ever heard of this rather elusive punctuation called a period? Where is it?

 

[FrenzyWanderer]

Just a question. Have you ever heard of this rather elusive punctuation called a period? Where is it?

Sorry

I'll fix it

Thank you for pointing it out!

Any other comments please!

 

[Rosica]

Sorry

I'll fix it

Thank you for pointing it out!

Any other comments please!

Why should we care about a story posted outside SH? Next, you will take me to Discord to have my organs removed.

 

[FrenzyWanderer]

Why should we care about a story posted outside SH? Next, you will take me to Discord to have my organs removed.

I'm extremely sorry I copied the wrong link. It's there in SH too

Why should we care about a story posted outside SH? Next, you will take me to Discord to have my organs removed.

I refuse to level up! (Don’t ask about my sister’s opinion on this)

What would any normal person do after they isekai'ed to another world? Well that shouldn't even be a question. Grind up levels, become strong and conquer the world with overpowered cheat abilities. But Ren isn't that kind of 'Normal' What if he conquers the world without levelling up? without...

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