Review of the work "The Mad Immortal"

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Hi. It is extremely important for me to hear your opinion about my work.

The Mad Immortal

A Devil torn from the depths of Hell is reborn in the body of a child and condemns that child to suffering. From his earliest childhood, Grey is drawn into a large-scale conspiracy. He is used. He is betrayed. He is tormented. How is he supposed to survive if he...

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My book is getting a lot of views and likes, but I still don't know exactly what people think about the quality of my work.
Please review the story and write a review so that I can understand exactly what I need to improve.

 

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Hi. It is extremely important for me to hear your opinion about my work.

The Mad Immortal

A Devil torn from the depths of Hell is reborn in the body of a child and condemns that child to suffering. From his earliest childhood, Grey is drawn into a large-scale conspiracy. He is used. He is betrayed. He is tormented. How is he supposed to survive if he...

www.scribblehub.com

My book is getting a lot of views and likes, but I still don't know exactly what people think about the quality of my work.
Please review the story and write a review so that I can understand exactly what I need to improve.

Adding this to my reading list. Will definitely read it and review it.