Opinion on my new cover art.

[c37]

You just see something random that's blue & red colored.

If you had used black line art, it might have been slightly better.

I think i'll just edit few things and see if it is clear.

 

[FRWriter]

I think i'll just edit few things and see if it is clear.

Just a suggestion... a blue person on a blue background and a red person on a red background is exactly why you can't see anything. Why don't you try flipping it around?

 

[c37]

Just a suggestion... a blue person on a blue background and a red person on a red background is exactly why you can't see anything. Why don't you try flipping it around?

Opinion?

 

[Conqueror_Quack]

Much better but the abbadon part is still illegible

 

[c37]

changed the font size too.

 

[Conqueror_Quack]

Testing

 

[FRWriter]

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Testing

Already considerably better.

@c37

Now do some Black lineart and cover the contours & outlines of the characters, and your cover most likely not only works, but looks awesome.
Here is some AI excrement work, just to clarify what I mean.

 

[Daeron]

Already considerably better.

@c37

Now do some Black lineart and cover the contours & outlines of the characters, and your cover most likely not only works, but looks awesome.
Here is some AI excrement work, just to clarify what I mean.


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I don't know why, but i think it's my personal taste. With black outline, it's killing the mysterious vibe.

 

[FRWriter]

I don't know why, but i think it's my personal taste. With black outline, it's killing the mysterious vibe.

Honestly, I disagree, but ultimately it's about what c37 wants. I can promise you, though, such a washed-out cover will not successfully pull in a large audience. I even prefer the AI version to the original, but it's just my opinion. I'm curious about how the final version will look in whatever direction the author may go.