Poison Test Feedback

RayVer

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Hello everyone, Rayver here. I've just released a new novel (lightning mage), and it's been a while since I've written a story so I'll be starting this story feedback post. As you can tell by the name, the idea is sort of out there! The way feedback on this thread will work is in the form of a poison test, you read chapter 1 and if you enjoy you read the next and so on and so on. When you reach a point you think 'nah, I'm no longer enjoying the story' you stop and drop where you stopped in the thread, and if possible the reason why. Thus the name poison test.

I feel the thread should be in a way that everyone can drop their novels and request for a poison test, after all this is a community. Here is the format for requesting:
Please can you poison test (xyz novel)

and here is the format of the feedback:

Novel Read -
Chapter Stopped - (e.g. 4/10 or 10/10)
Reason you stopped reading -
Constructive Feedback & Advice -


Hopefully I can gain some useful insight and maybe other fellow readers aswell.
 

CLASS_NOT_AUTHOR

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I have a novel I'm still writing. Haven't gotten to publishing it yet, but I do have a stock of chapters. If I send them here, could I participate in this?
I totally understand if ur not willing to read it like this. Hopefully its worth ur time.
Have a nice day.
 

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Eldoria

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I have a novel I'm still writing. Haven't gotten to publishing it yet, but I do have a stock of chapters. If I send them here, could I participate in this?
I totally understand if ur not willing to read it like this. Hopefully its worth ur time.
Have a nice day.
Instead of attaching the chapters in .txt files, it is better to copy the chapters in spoiler format as follows:
Hello dude
Hello guy
Hello everyone
So, the reviewers can mark the chapters and correct the chapters.
 

CLASS_NOT_AUTHOR

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Instead of attaching the chapters in .txt files, it is better to copy the chapters in spoiler format as follows:
Hello dude
Hello guy
Hello everyone
So, the reviewers can mark the chapters and correct the chapters.
Ic. Thanks man. I'll do from next time.
Have a nice day.
 
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