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[MakBow]

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Cursed Hand: With Simple Curses, I Annihilated Everything | Scribble Hub

 

[Humanistheart]

Hmmm, the title feels a little off putting if I’m being honest.

 

[MakBow]

Hmmm, the title feels a little off putting if I’m being honest.

What do you mean?

 

[Macha]

What do you mean?

You must be a Cardfight Vanguard player. Vanguard (and Bushiroad) loves that needlessly long and complicated names like Blue Wave Dragon, Tetra-Drive Dragon. Not all of us are Wang Zi who can trigger checks triple critical and some are uncomfortable with being reminded that they lost a game to Psyqulia.

Change your title name to something simpler like Cursed Hand: With Simple Curses, I Annihilated Everything Using the [Cursed Hand] or Cursed Hand: With Simple Curses, I Annihilated Everything Using the [Cursed Hand]

Hope this helps.

 

[MakBow]

You must be a Cardfight Vanguard player. Vanguard (and Bushiroad) loves that needlessly long and complicated names like Blue Wave Dragon, Tetra-Drive Dragon. Not all of us are Wang Zi who can trigger checks triple critical and some are uncomfortable with being reminded that they lost a game to Psyqulia.

Change your title name to something simpler like Cursed Hand: With Simple Curses, I Annihilated Everything Using the [Cursed Hand] or Cursed Hand: With Simple Curses, I Annihilated Everything Using the [Cursed Hand]

Hope this helps.

1. Never played vanguard before and I don't even know what Bushiroad is (Did watch the anime for Cardfight)
2. ?