Looking for feedback on my cover and blurb (Dystopian LitRPG)

[ESBarreto]

Hey everyone! I'm looking for honest feedback on my cover for my serial Resonance Law (dystopian LitRPG).

• Does the cover grab your attention when scrolling through new releases?

All constructive criticism welcome brutal honesty appreciated !

 

[Eldoria]

Great, your fiction is on the right track. The engagement stats are quite good for a fiction with fewer than 20 chapters.

The cover is better than before. But I don't understand why you like the MC facing backwards so much? Well, it's just curiosity, not a weakness of the cover. Maybe you want to build a sense of mystery in a dystopian world. That makes sense.

As for the synopsis, I can already imagine the conflict. This is just a sharpening. It depends on the emphasis of your fiction. If you want to emphasise the dystopian world, then using a limited third-person POV might be better. However, if you want to increase the sense of mystery and reader immersion, then using a first-person POV is worth considering.

Overall, your cover and synopsis are good.

If there are any additional points, perhaps I would suggest adding a Trigger Warning, especially if your content contains sensitive material, as well as filtering potential readers and preventing readers from giving a substandard rating.

 

[ESBarreto]

Great, your fiction is on the right track. The engagement stats are quite good for a fiction with fewer than 20 chapters.

The cover is better than before. But I don't understand why you like the MC facing backwards so much? Well, it's just curiosity, not a weakness of the cover. Maybe you want to build a sense of mystery in a dystopian world. That makes sense.

As for the synopsis, I can already imagine the conflict. This is just a sharpening. It depends on the emphasis of your fiction. If you want to emphasise the dystopian world, then using a limited third-person POV might be better. However, if you want to increase the sense of mystery and reader immersion, then using a first-person POV is worth considering.

Overall, your cover and synopsis are good.

If there are any additional points, perhaps I would suggest adding a Trigger Warning, especially if your content contains sensitive material, as well as filtering potential readers and preventing readers from giving a substandard rating.

Thanks so much for the detailed feedback!
Actually, I do use first-person POV in Resonance Law. It helps with the mystery and immersion aspect you mentioned.
Great call on the Trigger Warning too. I'll add one.

E.S.

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