Looking for feedback (My First Revenge Novel)

[MakBow]

I want to know if I'm doing this well for a revenge novel as I want to use trashy elements from typical revenge novels and actually make them good. I'm not trying to reinvent but rather take trash or mid fun novels (Failure Frame, Redo of Healer for example) and use their elements to make a good revenge story, things I felt they wasted such as characters, ideas, creative liberties they discarded.
It's not going to be some reality warping, high out versal power scaling trash, but a grounded story that has my main character be in the support role.

What I currently want criticism on:
- Characters
- Setting
- Worldbuilding and how I handle it
- Power System and how I slowly reveal it to the reader
- If I'm using the rather sensitive stuff in a respectable manner (not for shock value basically)

(Waning Mentions of rape)
Link: Re:Healer | Scribble Hub
(Honorable mentions: I ground my power system like a lot, so don't expect it to be very magical & I try to make any injuries as realistic as possible, so things like broke ribs, internal bleeding, and that stuff will be mentioned a lot.)

 

[unlaumy]

This is the 4th thread? Maybe the feedbacks in other threads aren't up to your expectation, but you need to pause a little. I'm sure other users will find it and add their opinions sooner or later.

 

[MakBow]

This is the 4th thread? Maybe the feedbacks in other threads aren't up to your expectation, but you need to pause a little. I'm sure other users will find it and add their opinions sooner or later.

I know, I would just delete them, but I don't know how. I guess I'm just desperate as this is a novel I really want to get out there. This is going to be my last one anyway.