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[Kalebbewk]

Silent Bloom

Shizukesa Hana has never understood emotions. While others use their feelings as power through Soul Ink, he moves through life quietly, unable to resonate with anything or anyone. His days are routine, uneventful, and defined by a calm that never changes. Everything shifts when he enters Hinode...

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[Xcalibur_Xc]

post it in the story feedback not here

 

[L1aei]

Silent Bloom

Shizukesa Hana has never understood emotions. While others use their feelings as power through Soul Ink, he moves through life quietly, unable to resonate with anything or anyone. His days are routine, uneventful, and defined by a calm that never changes. Everything shifts when he enters Hinode...

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Please need some quick feedback

I'll take a peek, but like @Xcalibur_Xc said: Wrong Room. You'll find authors here, not readers, and readers are gonna be the ones to tell you what you want to know a bit more than us.