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I just started on chapter 1 titled 'A World Without a Pain'. Even though each story has a different genre, the sub-genre remains psychological horror. You can read it here.
Anyone interested in psychological horror short stories?
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LeilaniOtter
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Yay, more short story horror writers!
I was thinking it was just me and @Fox-Trot-9 *^^*
I was thinking it was just me and @Fox-Trot-9 *^^*
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Thank you, appreciate that
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I already put that in my reading list.
Keep up the good work?
"Hello, fellow horror fans! I’m the guy who might be watching your story… from the shadows ? Excited to share scares and read yours too!"
And don’t worry… I only bite a little ? Looking forward to reading your works!"
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Thank you. I'm flattered as a fellow horror writer!
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We don't have enough horror in Scribble Hub. *^^*
Analysis of The Room of Truth
By: AboHnan777
Genre: Psychological Horror / Mystery / Supernatural
A New Name Among the Greats?
Despite being (allegedly) his first novel, AboHnan777 writes like someone who’s been in the game for decades. The Room of Truth feels less like a beginner’s experiment and more like a psychological horror masterclass.
Story Overview (No Major Spoilers)
The story begins with Sevrin — a seemingly ordinary man — entering a strange hotel. But as each chapter unfolds, we discover:
• This isn’t his first time here.
• The “hotel” isn’t what it seems.
• Reality itself may be bending — or broken.
Each visit to the “room” unravels pieces of a massive puzzle involving memory loss, sin, guilt, corrupted justice, and psychological torment. What starts as eerie turns into hellish, literally.
What Makes This Story Stand Out?
Strength Explanation
Chapter Structure Short, punchy, and always ends with a cliffhanger — binge-worthy.
Atmosphere & Horror Uses psychological tension, not just gore. You feel trapped with Sevrin.
Symbolism Eye in the door. The faceless. The decaying cells. The child. The whispers. All have layered meaning.
James Coyle One of the most chilling “antagonists” I’ve read. Not a monster, but a human horror.
Themes Deals with trauma, denial, corrupt power, and the weight of guilt in a unique and haunting way.
Literary Quality Descriptions are visceral but never overdone. Dialogue is sharp. Pacing is phenomenal.
? Chapter 21 Changed Everything
The shift in Chapter 21 — where Sevrin seemingly enters James’s childhood home — is one of the boldest and smartest twists.
We begin to understand that James might not just be a villain… but a victim of his own past.
• The preserved toy gun → Symbol of innocence twisted by authority.
• The abusive mother → Possible origin of James’s violent personality.
• Sevrin’s role → Possibly more than a “visitor” — maybe part of this repeating nightmare.
This is storytelling with psychological depth, not just horror for the sake of horror.
About the Author: AboHnan777
If this really is his first novel, then AboHnan777 is not just a rising talent — he’s already a heavyweight.
The way he handles:
• Non-linear memory
• Symbolic horror
• Layered dialogue
• Long-term suspense
…puts him in the same conversation as writers like Junji Ito, Stephen King, or Thomas Ligotti (but with a distinct voice of his own).
Final Verdict
The Room of Truth is not just a horror story — it’s a descent into a beautifully crafted nightmare.
It’s immersive, symbolic, terrifying, and — above all — emotionally real.
If you’re not reading it, you’re missing one of the most unique experiences on Scribble Hub.
Rating: 9.5/10
Would’ve been 10/10, but we want to leave room for the inevitable masterpiece this author will drop next.
If you’re a horror fan — read it.
If you’re a writer — study it.
If you’re the author — don’t stop.
By: AboHnan777
Genre: Psychological Horror / Mystery / Supernatural
A New Name Among the Greats?
Despite being (allegedly) his first novel, AboHnan777 writes like someone who’s been in the game for decades. The Room of Truth feels less like a beginner’s experiment and more like a psychological horror masterclass.
Story Overview (No Major Spoilers)
The story begins with Sevrin — a seemingly ordinary man — entering a strange hotel. But as each chapter unfolds, we discover:
• This isn’t his first time here.
• The “hotel” isn’t what it seems.
• Reality itself may be bending — or broken.
Each visit to the “room” unravels pieces of a massive puzzle involving memory loss, sin, guilt, corrupted justice, and psychological torment. What starts as eerie turns into hellish, literally.
What Makes This Story Stand Out?
Strength Explanation
Chapter Structure Short, punchy, and always ends with a cliffhanger — binge-worthy.
Atmosphere & Horror Uses psychological tension, not just gore. You feel trapped with Sevrin.
Symbolism Eye in the door. The faceless. The decaying cells. The child. The whispers. All have layered meaning.
James Coyle One of the most chilling “antagonists” I’ve read. Not a monster, but a human horror.
Themes Deals with trauma, denial, corrupt power, and the weight of guilt in a unique and haunting way.
Literary Quality Descriptions are visceral but never overdone. Dialogue is sharp. Pacing is phenomenal.
? Chapter 21 Changed Everything
The shift in Chapter 21 — where Sevrin seemingly enters James’s childhood home — is one of the boldest and smartest twists.
We begin to understand that James might not just be a villain… but a victim of his own past.
• The preserved toy gun → Symbol of innocence twisted by authority.
• The abusive mother → Possible origin of James’s violent personality.
• Sevrin’s role → Possibly more than a “visitor” — maybe part of this repeating nightmare.
This is storytelling with psychological depth, not just horror for the sake of horror.
About the Author: AboHnan777
If this really is his first novel, then AboHnan777 is not just a rising talent — he’s already a heavyweight.
The way he handles:
• Non-linear memory
• Symbolic horror
• Layered dialogue
• Long-term suspense
…puts him in the same conversation as writers like Junji Ito, Stephen King, or Thomas Ligotti (but with a distinct voice of his own).
Final Verdict
The Room of Truth is not just a horror story — it’s a descent into a beautifully crafted nightmare.
It’s immersive, symbolic, terrifying, and — above all — emotionally real.
If you’re not reading it, you’re missing one of the most unique experiences on Scribble Hub.
Rating: 9.5/10
Would’ve been 10/10, but we want to leave room for the inevitable masterpiece this author will drop next.
If you’re a horror fan — read it.
If you’re a writer — study it.
If you’re the author — don’t stop.
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I would be, but haven't even had time to write, let alone read, much lately!
Thank you my friend, your words not only made my day but also made my year. Thank you for these beautiful words and I am very happy that you liked them. I do not think that the novel is as you described it. I do not think that it reaches the level of these greats. It is my first novel and it is not complete. I hope that if you notice any mistakes or anything, tell me. I hope that I will live up to your expectations. Thank you
