Adult dark comedy feedback

[Madkins]

First off, I'm not looking for reviews or any real effort here. This story is one that I pitched a few days ago, and it was rejected outright. So, naturally I ran with it making a summary, title, and two chapters.

I'm just looking to get some feedback on what kind of dark comedy people are into. Perhaps if you think that what I have is too much, or not enough? The story is supposed to be a cross of, Dantes Inferno X Dogma X with a little Bruce Almighty.


I’m the last human left, because reality fell apart, and now everyone can be whatever they want to be. | Scribble Hub

 

[Madkins]

From all the messages I've received, I most likely have my answer. Thanks guys!

 

[HisDivineShadow]

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[RepresentingWrath]

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Nothing to see here, move on.

 

[HisDivineShadow]

Nothing to see here, move on.

Right

 

[Madkins]

Right

Right on

 

[HisDivineShadow]

Right on

 

[Madkins]

Sorry man, did I confuse you?

 

[HisDivineShadow]

You posted a thank-you note but I honestly don’t see what for. Irony? Post-irony? Just confusion? Also, your link is super unclear no one’s gonna click that.

 

[Madkins]

You posted a thank-you note but I honestly don’t see what for. Irony? Post-irony? Just confusion? Also, your link is super unclear no one’s gonna click that.

Yeah, I meant the thank you note, that's all. People DM'd me their thoughts. So, I was just letting anyone else here know I got enough feedback, and it was appreciated. As for the link not being clear I'm not sure I understand, if you'd elaborate it'd appreciate it.

 

[HisDivineShadow]

Yeah, I meant the thank you note, that's all. People DM'd me their thoughts. So, I was just letting anyone else here know I got enough feedback, and it was appreciated. As for the link not being clear I'm not sure I understand, if you'd elaborate it'd appreciate it.

I can’t see where your link goes, and I don’t open links like that.
That’s what I meant