Isn't they look cute together? ??

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Aren't they looking cute together?? just read some romance novel and came up with this ? - happy to hear back from you.
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> These windmills look awful.

A bit harsh.

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> happy to hear back from you.

It's a fun piece.

Note the tangent between her hair and the horizon. Also note tangents between propellers and image edge.

The far right windmill's roofline/propellor may not be mutually perpendicular.

Lose the gradient on the far right windmill? Like far left's.

I'm not sure if the tulips and basket help. Workshop knock backing their chroma? Or something.

The linework on her hands is a bit disjointed compared to forearms. The rendering is inconsistent.

I feel like the woman needs some ornament - belt, girdle, jewelry, embroidery, flamberge, etcetera.

The dark stichwork on his shirt annoys me. Beyond that he needs a cutie mark, earring, embroidered shirt, prop, something.

Keep at it!
The bones of the piece are strong. It just needs a bit of polish.
 
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HeguenDmerak said:
Is the romance, I have a severe allergy to emotions. Yuk.

And the dude looks like the fairy vampire... what was his name... wait I as google... Yeah Robert pattison.
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You got it right ?
RepresentingDesire said:
These windmills look awful. Like they are an insult to windmills.
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Noted.
Placeholder said:
> These windmills look awful.

A bit harsh.

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> happy to hear back from you.

It's a fun piece.

Note the tangent between her hair and the horizon. Also note tangents between propellers and image edge.

The far right windmill's roofline/propellor may not be mutually perpendicular.

Lose the gradient on the far right windmill? Like far left's.

I'm not sure if the tulips and basket help. Workshop knock backing their chroma? Or something.

The linework on her hands is a bit disjointed compared to forearms. The rendering is inconsistent.

I feel like the woman needs some ornament - belt, girdle, jewelry, embroidery, flamberge, etcetera.

The dark stichwork on his shirt annoys me. Beyond that he needs a cutie mark, earring, embroidered shirt, prop, something.

Keep at it!
The bones of the piece are strong. It just needs a bit of polish.
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Thanks for underlining these.
 
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Why does she have oranges when they are clearly in the Netherlands, or at least somewhere with a windy climate? The basket with flowers implies that she picked them, but oranges only grow in the tropics. Did she just get back from the grocery store? Who goes to the grocery store for just flowers and oranges? Dude needs to get as far away from her as possible. She will be his downfall. Just as Eve with Adam, it has always been the woman who has led the man astray.
 
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Guys, this was just a character art. I get it, windmills are not good! I understand and I appreciate your comments and feedback. Thank you all ?❤
 
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druAg_Eithel said:
Guys, this was just a character art. I get it, windmills are not good! I understand and I appreciate your comments and feedback. Thank you all ?❤
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I kind of liked them, really. Reminded me of our few visits to Holland, Michigan (yep, it really is a place, just like Hell, Michigan. It's a state that really gets around).
 
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