I'm a new writer, and I'd appreciate some feedbacks on my story.

[SteelyGamer1]

Hi! I'm a new writer who only writes for fun, so I'd appreciate some feedback on my story.

I'm not that confident about the first five chapters of it, though, and expect some grammar errors and/or phrasing problems—English isn't my first language.

The story name is CORES: Servant Archives.

Again, I only write this just for fun, thanks for understanding!

(Edit: Sorry, I'm still new to Scribble Hub. Turns out my novel is still being approved, so it won't show right now until 24 hours—that's what it said when I searched for it—so, sorry again.)
(Edit #2: You can search up my novel now! Here's the link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1773969/cores-servant-archives/)

 

[GreenLemonShark]

If you’re worried about technical stuff like grammar, spelling, or sentence flow, I definitely recommend using Grammarly. I use it too, and it’s been super helpful for catching small mistakes and making sure everything reads smoothly.

Most of us are writing in our own echo chambers, so there are always going to be mistakes. It’s just part of the process. ?

 

[lydiawinehouse]

Hi! I'm a new writer who only writes for fun, so I'd appreciate some feedback on my story.

I'm not that confident about the first five chapters of it, though, and expect some grammar errors and/or phrasing problems—English isn't my first language.

The story name is CORES: Servant Archives.

Again, I only write this just for fun, thanks for understanding!

(Edit: Sorry, I'm still new to Scribble Hub. Turns out my novel is still being approved, so it won't show right now until 24 hours—that's what it said when I searched for it—so, sorry again.)

oh-, that is quite okay Steely, I am new too in Scribble and trying what can I get in here, I didn't know new stories would not be on the first page because I didn't bother to search of see mine when I first started. Since it is new, afraid it will be going hard to find, I suggest you put along the LINK a long with the post

ps; you were right, I searched for you series and couldn't find anything

If you’re worried about technical stuff like grammar, spelling, or sentence flow, I definitely recommend using Grammarly. I use it too, and it’s been super helpful for catching small mistakes and making sure everything reads smoothly.

Most of us are writing in our own echo chambers, so there are always going to be mistakes. It’s just part of the process. ?

I tried using it once, but forgot I installed it. did it have a translation to several languages/work with another language? since i'm not making only English stories, plus you made me wanna read what you wrote since you suggest Grammarly.

 

[GreenLemonShark]

I tried using it once, but forgot I installed it. did it have a translation to several languages/work with another language? since i'm not making only English stories, plus you made me wanna read what you wrote since you suggest Grammarly.

I’m not totally sure if Grammarly works well with different languages, I think it’s mainly focused on english, but I’m sure there are some settings or alternatives out there that help with bilingual writing.

I grew up in a household where I was learning two languages at once, and even now there are moments where I’ll just blank on an english word, or I’ll phrase something in a way that makes perfect sense in my native language but reads a little odd in english. You’re not alone, it’s something I still catch myself doing.

And if you do end up checking out my story just because I mentioned Grammarly, thank you so much. That honestly means a lot. ?

 

[Humanistheart]

“the same clan was born on that day by her mother. “ … sorry, on this world are there other birth options beyond mothers? If not? Seems a weird intro…