How to refine this minor villain's portion

NotaNuffian

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Context: MC is less than twelve years old and now is currently fighting against said minor villain in a life and death no holds barred fight.

------start of villain's portion-------

"God I love going up against young geniuses like you! Stripping you. Breaking you. Before stomping the smugass likes of you to pieces!!! Ahh~!"

Like forcing down on boys and girls, oh the youthfulness~ the joy of strangling beautiful futures~

------end of villain portion-------

The Diddy-ing part came into my head as I was describing how the guy took joy in tearing budding florals that would soon bloom to beautiful flowers and the joy is orgasmic to him.

So anyway, how to make it worse?
 
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Make them sweaty and salivate l more... generally more moist.

Talk about what the villain is looking at while they spoke, how they are violating the MC with their gaze.
 

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And remember - if you actually describe any sexual activity involving someone under 12 years, not to mention non-consensual one, be prepared for your story to be hidden at best.
 

NotaNuffian

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His name is Jefferson Epsteam and this takes place on Minor Saint James.
:ROFLMAO:

Yes I am lol-ing twice.

Make them sweaty and salivate l more... generally more moist.

Talk about what the villain is looking at while they spoke, how they are violating the MC with their gaze.
Ok

And remember - if you actually describe any sexual activity involving someone under 12 years, not to mention non-consensual one, be prepared for your story to be hidden at best.
:blob_hmm::blob_hmm_two:
 
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Jefferson Epsteam
 
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