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[Lucifer07]

Sign In Sovereign

One man. One system. Infinite power-if he dares to claim it. When Aryan Verma wakes up in a parallel futuristic world, he’s gifted with a mysterious Sign-In System that grants him powerful rewards each day-money, skills, influence, and secrets. From obscurity to elite circles, Aryan rises...

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[blackcrowcrowd]

No offense, but you should go to Story Feedback Forum Page
On another note, I'll at least give my first impressions of the synopsis

Spoiler: Synopsis

Good
1. Beginning does sound pretty cool

Bad
1. Doesn't tell something truly unique about the world
2. Some unusual typing (Sudden capital in the middle of a sentence, no space between words on a list, etc.)

 

[Lucifer07]

No offense, but you should go to Story Feedback Forum Page
On another note, I'll at least give my first impressions of the synopsis

Spoiler: Synopsis

Good
1. Beginning does sound pretty cool

Bad
1. Doesn't tell something truly unique about the world
2. Some unusual typing (Sudden capital in the middle of a sentence, no space between words on a list, etc.)

Thank you

 

[hidayo]

I'll give it a try this Saturday.

 

[Lucifer07]

I'll give it a try this Saturday.

Thnx