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agnivrat

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Hello fellow readers and creators, I'm Agnivrat- an immature and new writer currently working on the series Child of Prophecy.
Let me tell you a little about my story:
5000 years ago, an unknown being calling itself the Servant of Nihir, the Divinity Reaper, descended upon Earth. He unleashed unspeakable havoc on the city of Trigarta. Thousands of people fell victim to his unstoppable carnage. He spared no children, women or elders.

The rampage ended when humanity’s two greatest warriors Emperor Agnivardhana and Sword God Divyajit united against it, igniting a battle that shook the heavens and earth. This marked the start of a desperate war for survival between Nihir’s dark army and mankind.

Millennia have passed, and the struggle still continues. But for Aksh, a boy trapped in the slums, the war beyond means nothing. His real battle is at home, against a monstrous father whose entertainment lies in abusing and harassing him, his mother, and his sister. Every return home brings fresh horrors. Yet, everything changes when a mysterious voice within him begins to call him the child of prophecy. From that point, Aksh unknowingly started gathering the attention of allies and enemies alike and was soon pushed to the centre of everyone's attention. What is this voice inside his head? What prophecy is it talking about? Join Aksh on his journey and let's find out together why is he called child of prophecy.
There is no harem, reincarnation or isekai. The reason is simple: There are too many stories already in the market on reincarnation and isekai so it became very saturated and as for the harem, its just that i don't personally like it that's it.
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agnivrat

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You guys can drop the link of you novel with the review of mine
I'll reply within 12 hours and give an honest and brutal review of your novel
 

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I'll read yours and leave a review on the story page. Well, I'll read as much as I can. Never know if things will be your taste or not!
Posted my review and a few chapters comments.

Cheers!
 
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I'll read yours and leave a review on the story page. Well, I'll read as much as I can. Never know if things will be your taste or not!
Posted my review and a few chapters comments.

Cheers!
Just read the first chapter and dropped the comment on how i felt about it. I will read more chapters and then will also give the rating to it
 

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Just read the first chapter and dropped the comment on how i felt about it. I will read more chapters and then will also give the rating to it
Do not overlook the glossary! It is very helpful!
 

agnivrat

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Do not overlook the glossary! It is very helpful!
yeah I'll look into it. I really enjoy the stories that are a little slow paced because when they hit the main part the excitement you get feel totally earned. My favourite anime is onepiece its long and slow paced but when the main part of every arc hits it really become enjoyable and i think your novel might be one of those as well. I am also trying to write mine in the same way as well. A little slow at the starting even if it won't hook that much of a readers. I'll read more chapters of your novel whenever i get time in between❤️
 

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Hello fellow readers and creators, I'm Agnivrat- an immature and new writer currently working on the series Child of Prophecy.
Let me tell you a little about my story:
5000 years ago, an unknown being calling itself the Servant of Nihir, the Divinity Reaper, descended upon Earth. He unleashed unspeakable havoc on the city of Trigarta. Thousands of people fell victim to his unstoppable carnage. He spared no children, women or elders.

The rampage ended when humanity’s two greatest warriors Emperor Agnivardhana and Sword God Divyajit united against it, igniting a battle that shook the heavens and earth. This marked the start of a desperate war for survival between Nihir’s dark army and mankind.

Millennia have passed, and the struggle still continues. But for Aksh, a boy trapped in the slums, the war beyond means nothing. His real battle is at home, against a monstrous father whose entertainment lies in abusing and harassing him, his mother, and his sister. Every return home brings fresh horrors. Yet, everything changes when a mysterious voice within him begins to call him the child of prophecy. From that point, Aksh unknowingly started gathering the attention of allies and enemies alike and was soon pushed to the centre of everyone's attention. What is this voice inside his head? What prophecy is it talking about? Join Aksh on his journey and let's find out together why is he called child of prophecy.
There is no harem, reincarnation or isekai. The reason is simple: There are too many stories already in the market on reincarnation and isekai so it became very saturated and as for the harem, its just that i don't personally like it that's it.
click here to read
Idk if you'll be interested but im just putting mine out there hehe
 
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