Valmond
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I just started to think about this, but here are a few.
Reader,
“MC is overpowered!”
—> Proceeds to get the crap beaten outta them the next chapter.
Reader,
“MC still won!”
Me:
—> Reflects to Chapters 2, 3, 4, 5.
Reader,
“Why don’t they just power up?!”
Me:
—> Thinks about chapter 5 ending.
—> Reflects to everything that’s been built up.
Reader,
“They’ve been fighting on their own!”
Me thinking: Do you see anyone else alive here?
Reader,
“Why don’t character help?”
Me thinking: Literally said they were injured in their battle with one of the main antagonists, and can only effectively act as a guide for the time being.
Reader,
“Too depressing!”
Me: Looks at tragedy tag.
Also me: Yeah, I know right?
Reader,
“Takes too long to power up!”
Me: Their power is literally sealed, and at this point it was made clear that they go through phases in each battle due to their nature.
Reader,
“Aaaahh!!!”
Me: Yeah, I ain’t puttin’ out that fire.
Reader,
“I don’t want to decipher the story!”
Me: And I don’t want to deal with your stupidity, but we both can’t have what we want, can we?
Reader,
“Would they just say it already?!”
Me: No.
Reader,
“You’re not supposed to write like this!”
Me:






Reader,
“MC just powered up late battle!”
Me: Yeah, because like every other time. They crossed into the next stage due to the previous occurrences. The story literally mentions a Countdown to Ruin.
Reader,
“So, MC will just power up, is that it?”
Me:
—> Thinking about Chapter 5, and the main’s steadily returning memories and power over time.
Their power literally has a cap, and as clearly noted. They have a while to go before reaching the cap for this story.
Reader,
“Well, if they can just beat them. Why don’t they just do that?”
Me: Do you not know how to read and understand nuance? Even then, their power is literally sealed. On top of that, they have restrictions due to how they are as a character. For one, they hate fighting.
Also me: I don’t know, maybe it was mentioned.
Reader:
“Why is the world like this?!”
Me: Just gotta read, just gotta read.
Thinks about specifically Chapters 1, 4, 8, 14, 18, 19, etc.
(To answer this. Chapter 1, pretty much shows when the world fell completely into madness. Chapter 8, it showed how it happened, as in what caused the world to fall into its state.
Chapters 14, 18, and 19 shows what happened to the lead up to the main arriving at the start of Chapter 1 and their presence revealed in Chapter 2. The other chapters helps to clarify this.
The final piece though, even though there are hints. The final piece connects in the finale, the one who blanketed the worlds in the Eternal Night. I’m sure you can guess who did it.)
Anyway, this was just a small portion. I think about it and laugh, what about you lot?
Reader,
“MC is overpowered!”
—> Proceeds to get the crap beaten outta them the next chapter.
Reader,
“MC still won!”
Me:
—> Reflects to Chapters 2, 3, 4, 5.
Reader,
“Why don’t they just power up?!”
Me:
—> Thinks about chapter 5 ending.
—> Reflects to everything that’s been built up.
Reader,
“They’ve been fighting on their own!”
Me thinking: Do you see anyone else alive here?
Reader,
“Why don’t character help?”
Me thinking: Literally said they were injured in their battle with one of the main antagonists, and can only effectively act as a guide for the time being.
Reader,
“Too depressing!”
Me: Looks at tragedy tag.
Also me: Yeah, I know right?

Reader,
“Takes too long to power up!”
Me: Their power is literally sealed, and at this point it was made clear that they go through phases in each battle due to their nature.
Reader,
“Aaaahh!!!”
Me: Yeah, I ain’t puttin’ out that fire.

Reader,
“I don’t want to decipher the story!”
Me: And I don’t want to deal with your stupidity, but we both can’t have what we want, can we?
Reader,
“Would they just say it already?!”
Me: No.
Reader,
“You’re not supposed to write like this!”
Me:

Reader,
“MC just powered up late battle!”
Me: Yeah, because like every other time. They crossed into the next stage due to the previous occurrences. The story literally mentions a Countdown to Ruin.
Reader,
“So, MC will just power up, is that it?”
Me:
—> Thinking about Chapter 5, and the main’s steadily returning memories and power over time.
Their power literally has a cap, and as clearly noted. They have a while to go before reaching the cap for this story.
Reader,
“Well, if they can just beat them. Why don’t they just do that?”
Me: Do you not know how to read and understand nuance? Even then, their power is literally sealed. On top of that, they have restrictions due to how they are as a character. For one, they hate fighting.
Also me: I don’t know, maybe it was mentioned.
Reader:
“Why is the world like this?!”
Me: Just gotta read, just gotta read.

Thinks about specifically Chapters 1, 4, 8, 14, 18, 19, etc.
(To answer this. Chapter 1, pretty much shows when the world fell completely into madness. Chapter 8, it showed how it happened, as in what caused the world to fall into its state.
Chapters 14, 18, and 19 shows what happened to the lead up to the main arriving at the start of Chapter 1 and their presence revealed in Chapter 2. The other chapters helps to clarify this.
The final piece though, even though there are hints. The final piece connects in the finale, the one who blanketed the worlds in the Eternal Night. I’m sure you can guess who did it.)
Anyway, this was just a small portion. I think about it and laugh, what about you lot?
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