Check out My Story- The Ascendants: Early Years

[PandaKen07]

Synopsis
In the peaceful town of Ozamian, young Artreus dreams of becoming the strongest knight, inspired by his older brother, Arthur Reigns. But his life is shattered when the Demon King Abaddon attacks their town, killing his mother and leaving a trail of devastation. Determined to seek justice and revenge, Artreus embarks on a perilous journey to vanquish the most powerful monster in the land. Along the way, Artreus meets two mercenaries, Aiden Kronus and Mikael Kier, disciples of the legendary master, Samson. Together, they form an uneasy alliance, each driven by their own ambitions and haunted by their pasts. As they navigate deadly terrains, battle monstrous creatures, and uncover ancient secrets, Artreus begins to notice strange and unexplained powers within himself, hinting at a deeper, hidden truth about his identity. In this epic tale of courage and self-discovery, Artreus and his companions must learn to overcome their rivalries, trust each other, and rise against a looming threat that endangers not just their world but the fabric of existence itself. Reigns is a story of power, sacrifice, and the resilience needed to face the unknown

I hope you'll like it, please a comment/feedback and review

The Ascendants: Early Years

In the peaceful town of Ozamian, young Artreus dreams of becoming the strongest knight, inspired by his older brother, Arthur Reigns. But his life is shattered when the Demon King Abaddon attacks their town, killing his mother and leaving a trail of devastation. Determined to seek justice and...

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[-Omniscient-]

Sounds really interesting, though I think the synopsis would be easier to read if you split it into several paragraphs. Or perhaps that's just a me thing.

 

[Naash]

How the fuck do people manage to pump out 32 chapters in the span of 2 says ??? What the hell ???

I can't believe this.

 

[CharlesEBrown]

How the fuck do people manage to pump out 32 chapters in the span of 2 says ??? What the hell ???

I can't believe this.

Heh. My personal record was five, between two stories, in one day.
Usually manage two per day when I really get on a roll so that seems ... suspect, yes.

 

[FieryLou]

How the fuck do people manage to pump out 32 chapters in the span of 2 says ??? What the hell ???

I can't believe this.

I know what you think, BUT stop for a sec. It COULD be that he just stacked some chapters before he released them...

 

[Naash]

I know what you think, BUT stop for a sec. It COULD be that he just stacked some chapters before he released them...

I know I know. I'm mostly despairing at my lack of ability to plan chapters early.

 

[-Omniscient-]

I know what you think, BUT stop for a sec. It COULD be that he just stacked some chapters before he released them...

Agreed. If someone can pump out 32 chapters a day with more than 1k words, my worldview shall be broken. Dr. Google said that the highest known word count in a day was 10,000. However, there are more, such as (maybe) 15,000 words in a novel-writing contest.

 

[SurfAngel_1031]

I've written 3200 words today so far. I'm trying to finish up my a latest pirate tale to publish. The whole thing is about 8000 words total at the moment.
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Synopsis
In the peaceful town of Ozamian, young Artreus dreams of becoming the strongest knight, inspired by his older brother, Arthur Reigns. But his life is shattered when the Demon King Abaddon attacks their town, killing his mother and leaving a trail of devastation. Determined to seek justice and revenge, Artreus embarks on a perilous journey to vanquish the most powerful monster in the land. Along the way, Artreus meets two mercenaries, Aiden Kronus and Mikael Kier, disciples of the legendary master, Samson. Together, they form an uneasy alliance, each driven by their own ambitions and haunted by their pasts. As they navigate deadly terrains, battle monstrous creatures, and uncover ancient secrets, Artreus begins to notice strange and unexplained powers within himself, hinting at a deeper, hidden truth about his identity. In this epic tale of courage and self-discovery, Artreus and his companions must learn to overcome their rivalries, trust each other, and rise against a looming threat that endangers not just their world but the fabric of existence itself. Reigns is a story of power, sacrifice, and the resilience needed to face the unknown

I hope you'll like it, please a comment/feedback and review

The Ascendants: Early Years

In the peaceful town of Ozamian, young Artreus dreams of becoming the strongest knight, inspired by his older brother, Arthur Reigns. But his life is shattered when the Demon King Abaddon attacks their town, killing his mother and leaving a trail of devastation. Determined to seek justice and...

www.scribblehub.com

can't give you any feedback since a majority of this is being detected at anywhere from 100% (the synopsis) to 70-90% AI in chapters 4-7.
There's no indication of AI tags either. I used ZeroGPT.

 

[PandaKen07]

Hey guys! Whoa, I didn’t expect to see your replies here, what a nice surprise! I’m really glad you’re reading my novel. I’ve been working on releasing Volume 2 in the next 2 to 4 months. If you’re interested, feel free to check out the illustrations from Volume 1 too!

If you think my novel is AI—generated, perhaps my arts too

Sounds really interesting, though I think the synopsis would be easier to read if you split it into several paragraphs. Or perhaps that's just a me thing.

Thanks for your comment on Chapter 0, It helps me going to continue my novel.

Here's my illustration of chapter 1
Sudden Awakening Scene:

How the fuck do people manage to pump out 32 chapters in the span of 2 says ??? What the hell ???

I can't believe this

I just released the full volume — that’s how novelists do it, right? Gotta keep the readers happy, not leave them hanging on a cliff!

If you’re wondering how I do it — just download Microsoft Word or any writing platform, outline your ideas, turn them into full stories, save it all into one complete volume, and then release it. Don’t leave your readers hanging with one chapter at a time!

Sounds really interesting, though I think the synopsis would be easier to read if you split it into several paragraphs. Or perhaps that's just a me thing.

Bro, I think you’re right! That’s exactly what my friend used to do — shorten the synopsis and keep it tight.
I’ll get back to it after my exams this week. I’m still in college, so I’m not sure if I can finish my novel within 2 to 4 months... but who knows? It all depends on how much free time I get!

I've written 3200 words today so far. I'm trying to finish up my a latest pirate tale to publish. The whole thing is about 8000 words total at the moment.
I

can't give you any feedback since a majority of this is being detected at anywhere from 100% (the synopsis) to 70-90% AI in chapters 4-7.
There's no indication of AI tags either. I used ZeroGPT.

View attachment 38305I’m not too sure about that AI checker website. I’ve tried it before on some books and even the Bible — it wasn’t very accurate. You might want to check out QuillBot’s AI checker instead, but I’m not sure how accurate it is either... plus, you have to pay for it, so who knows?

I've written 3200 words today so far. I'm trying to finish up my a latest pirate tale to publish. The whole thing is about 8000 words total at the moment.
I

can't give you any feedback since a majority of this is being detected at anywhere from 100% (the synopsis) to 70-90% AI in chapters 4-7.
There's no indication of AI tags either. I used ZeroGPT.

View attachment 38305

I’m not too sure about that AI checker website. I’ve tried it before on some books and even the Bible it wasn’t very accurate. You might want to check out QuillBot’s AI checker instead, but I’m not sure how accurate it is either... plus, you have to pay for it, so who knows?
Anyways, what do you think of my art?

 

[TheIcMan]

Bros is it over for me? OP's reply looks entirely AI generated......
Edit: I'm like 1000% sure now.. but alas stupidity roams free in my empty head.

 

[PandaKen07]

Bros is it over for me? OP's reply looks entirely AI generated......
Edit: I'm like 1000% sure now.. but alas stupidity roams free in my empty head.

How the hell are my replies considered ai-generated? Maybe you didn’t fully understand the words I used — or maybe it’s the em dashes or something?

 

[Kitsuna]

Those garbage AI detectors are all inaccurate and shouldn't be taken seriously.

 

[Madmcgee]

There's like, two spots in the prologue that sort of have a small look of what I expect from AI, but it's not at all large chunks... And overall, I really don't think it was pushed through something like chatgbt...

And yeah, EM dashes set those things off since some models seem to like putting them in everywhere.

Honestly, I think OP is just being descriptive and maybe using Grammarly or something. No big deal... Autocorrect on a cellphone is 'AI'

On a side note OP, you should tidy up the synopsis and cut it down, also, avoid releasing more than one chapter a day, you'll get more eyes on your story that way.

 

[PandaKen07]

There's like, two spots in the prologue that sort of have a small look of what I expect from AI, but it's not at all large chunks... And overall, I really don't think it was pushed through something like chatgbt...

And yeah, EM dashes set those things off since some models seem to like putting them in everywhere.

Honestly, I think OP is just being descriptive and maybe using Grammarly or something. No big deal... Autocorrect on a cellphone is 'AI'

On a side note OP, you should tidy up the synopsis and cut it down, also, avoid releasing more than one chapter a day, you'll get more eyes on your story that way.

Thank you for your feedback and comment!
Mind if I ask, what’s wrong with using em dashes? A lot of webnovels, like Shadow Slave and Dragon Genesis: I Can Create Dragons, use them too. Is it really wrong to use them?

 

[-Omniscient-]

On a side note OP, you should tidy up the synopsis and cut it down, also, avoid releasing more than one chapter a day, you'll get more eyes on your story that way.

Agreed. While it may not be fun for the readers if you only release 1-3 or so chapters a day, it does make them go back and check to see if there are chapters frequently. That's what happened to me

Also, I don't think there's anything wrong with em dashes! I use them for my novels.

 

[Madmcgee]

Agreed. While it may not be fun for the readers if you only release 1-3 or so chapters a day, it does make them go back and check to see if there are chapters frequently. That's what happened to me

Yuppers, learned that the hard way 'rawdogging' the process of uploading stuff lol. I never went to the forums, just started uploading. You just reach a far broader scope of the reading base that way, because people very often seem to 'search' by what's been updated on any particular day. (my experience, anyway)

And yeah, nothing's wrong the EM dash, I love the thing, but so do so LLM's, so a comparison can sometimes appear.

 

[PandaKen07]

Agreed. While it may not be fun for the readers if you only release 1-3 or so chapters a day, it does make them go back and check to see if there are chapters frequently. That's what happened to me

Also, I don't think there's anything wrong with em dashes! I use them for my novels.

I see... I think I’ll take your advice. Hmm... maybe I’ll release 1 to 3 chapters after my exam week!
Anyway, what do you think of my character art? =D
The one in blue is Artreus, red is Aidan, and purple is Mikael!

 

[-Omniscient-]

I like them!! Artreus looks serious, Aidan looks furious, and Mikael looks playful!! I mean, I would guess that the last picture is of Artreus and Rafaela, but he doesn't have blue hair...?
My favorite is either Artreus or Mikael.

 

[FieryLou]

Thank you for your feedback and comment!
Mind if I ask, what’s wrong with using em dashes? A lot of webnovels, like Shadow Slave and Dragon Genesis: I Can Create Dragons, use them too. Is it really wrong to use them?

They use them in moderation. AI often just spams them, as they are "corretly" at this point.

Bros is it over for me? OP's reply looks entirely AI generated......
Edit: I'm like 1000% sure now.. but alas stupidity roams free in my empty head.

I just released the full volume — that’s how novelists do it, right? Gotta keep the readers happy, not leave them hanging on a cliff!

If you’re wondering how I do it — just download Microsoft Word or any writing platform, outline your ideas, turn them into full stories, save it all into one complete volume, and then release it. Don’t leave your readers hanging with one chapter at a time!

They sound overly happy I guess? And you seem to onlu use official words, just like ChatGPT would do it. Not saying that you use it, I just want to tell you were the confusion could come from.

 

[PandaKen07]

Are you saying they don't like my novel?

When I released my full volume?

They use them in moderation. AI often just spams them, as they are "corretly" at this point.

I just released the full volume — that’s how novelists do it, right? Gotta keep the readers happy, not leave them hanging on a cliff!

If you’re wondering how I do it — just download Microsoft Word or any writing platform, outline your ideas, turn them into full stories, save it all into one complete volume, and then release it. Don’t leave your readers hanging with one chapter at a time!

They sound overly happy I guess? And you seem to onlu use official words, just like ChatGPT would do it. Not saying that you use it, I just want to tell you were the confusion could come from.

Well, gotta keep it professional, bro. Just stay positive. Some people will be happy, and some might not, but that’s just how it goes.
I don’t want to leave them hanging, though... it really depends on them, or if they choose to stay mad. Either way, I’m keeping it professional.