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This is how I would do it.or switching between them every few chapters even though the their stories are almost completely disconnected?
I would experiment with doing one arc with one and then one arc with the other over and over until they meet up. Switching every few chapters might feel jarring if done too often.Here's something I've been wondering about my WIP Siren Called: the story is about a brother and sister being isekaid into another world. They get separated (neither of them even knows the other was brought over with them) and both go about doing their own thing. They're eventually going to meet up and their stories with become connected, but that's not going to be for a while.
So, which sounds better to you guys? Focusing entirely on one of the siblings until they finally meet up and then filling the reader in on what the other was doing all that time, or switching between them every few chapters even though the their stories are almost completely disconnected?