Yesterday I wrote my first chapter

[Deleted member 195328]

I wrote the chapter 1 of my novel and as a beginner I wanted some advices from writer/reader so please tell me what you think. And thank you for reading the post.

The Adventures of Aldric - Chapter 1: The Beginning | Scribble Hub

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[beast_regards]

Tense confusion. You are mixing the present and past tense.

 

[Deleted member 195328]

Tense confusion. You are mixing the present and past tense.

Thank you for the reply, I will be careful.

 

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As a new writer, sticking to basic principles will be useful as with anything. I can't stress this enough. You can spend a lot of time learning stuff that doesn't even matter as a new author. Keep everything simple, and you will be fine. I find that a lot of new authors are too focused on things that don't matter much at a beginner level. You don't need to be fancy.

Learn what your audience likes, and deliver them something that you both will enjoy.

 

[Deleted member 195328]

As a new writer, sticking to basic principles will be useful as with anything. I can't stress this enough. You can spend a lot of time learning stuff that doesn't even matter as a new author. Keep everything simple, and you will be fine. I find that a lot of new authors are too focused on things that don't matter much at a beginner level. You don't need to be fancy.

Learn what your audience likes, and deliver them something that you both will enjoy.

Thank you man, I just needed this advice for real.