My novel is approved after 9 hours… feedback?

[Phantonym]

It is on my profile but if you don’t feel like going there here is a link! I appreciate feedback! This is my first novel so I would like advice! I have used too many exclamation points in this message…!!!

The God’s Successor - Prologue – An Unruly God | Scribble Hub

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[AlwaysIrrelevant]

I'll totally look into it, and hope you check out Transcendence: Flesh and Chitin. It's not really a fair trade, as mine is a complete first, and it looks like this one is a chapter long, but that only means I have nothing to lose when I read your chapter. I have another book, but only check it out if you are essentially a pervert. It's massively different from the more serious book of Transcendence. TLDR: Transcendence is a normal fantasy novel based in VR. And Reincarnation as an Apocalyptic Catalyst is a combination of LITRPG action/adventure, and just flat out smut.

 

[Phantonym]

I'll totally look into it, and hope you check out Transcendence: Flesh and Chitin. It's not really a fair trade, as mine is a complete first, and it looks like this one is a chapter long, but that only means I have nothing to lose when I read your chapter. I have another book, but only check it out if you are essentially a pervert. It's massively different from the more serious book of Transcendence. TLDR: Transcendence is a normal fantasy novel based in VR. And Reincarnation as an Apocalyptic Catalyst is a combination of LITRPG action/adventure, and just flat out smut.

Ok I’ll try! I’ll read a chapter for every chapter you read of mine

 

[AlwaysIrrelevant]

Ok I’ll try! I’ll read a chapter for every chapter you read of mine

Alright, i'll leave a comment when you write a new chapter. Just promise, that if you like the story, go ahead and read however many chapters you want lol. I feel like my book doesn't get going until chapter 4, and then really picks up at 13, and then from there it's a lot of fun.

 

[Phantonym]

Alright, i'll leave a comment when you write a new chapter. Just promise, that if you like the story, go ahead and read however many chapters you want lol. I feel like my book doesn't get going until chapter 4, and then really picks up at 13, and then from there it's a lot of fun.

Ok lol
Tell me how you like the prologue