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After flipping through genres, I put my current book writing on hold to write this idea that came to my head.

The cover of the book should speak for itself.

Would you read?
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Concept Novel: Loaded Leveling: A Beautiful Life Journey

Synopsis:

Imagine a world where leveling up isn’t about grinding dungeons or defeating monsters, but... answering nature's call. Meet our MC, a hero whose power grows every time he poops, farts, or pees. Yes, his journey to greatness is paved with gas, golden streams, and bowel movements.

But it’s not all smooth sailing (or flushing). His ultimate nemesis? The terrifying Diseases of Constipation, Diarrhea, and Urinary Blockage, dark foes hell-bent on stopping him from ‘loading off’ and claiming his rightful place as the Supreme King of Relief.

From the daily struggle of staying loaded to explosive battles with evil lactose intolerance and spice-induced destruction, our MC’s life is a riot of hilarity and bodily functions.

With every squirm and squeeze, every toot and tinkle, he gets stronger—but will it be enough to conquer his final challenge of farting away the demon king? Let's fart(find) out....

One thing’s for sure: this is a story that STINKS of success.
 

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So this guy when hit by truck doesn't become op hero in another world. I get that gig.

But what happens after, like does the guy get merked and put it in hospital.

If then doesn't mean, your writing a story about a normal fucking guy.
 

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So....he is just gonna die when truck-kun hits him
 

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I already did one
Permission to borrow the art cover please
 

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I started something kind of like this - a guy who wrote (bad) Isekai is hit by a bus and finds out he'll be reborn as a school girl. Not a magical one, or one with special powers, just a teenaged girl, in school...

Just got two chapters done and lost interest...
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Can I borrow this story Idea? I'll make sure to mention your story as inspiration
 

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So this guy when hit by truck doesn't become op hero in another world. I get that gig.

But what happens after, like does the guy get merked and put it in hospital.

If then doesn't mean, your writing a story about a normal fucking guy.
The guy dodges the truck, Upsetting the natural order of Isekai and Prompting the Global Truck Association to put a hit on him.
literally unreadable
I will be the bane of your existence and I mean this extremely half-heartedly.
So....he is just gonna die when truck-kun hits him
Don't give me ideas.
 
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So he... is unkillable?

I mean, think about it. If there is an afterlife, that means you're isekai'ed there when you die. That means that, if you cannot be isekai'ed, you're a true immortal because you ain't ever leaving here.

(This logic is a bit shakier if there's no afterlife, but there's an angle to discuss whether 'nothing at all' is also a kind of different realm.)
 

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It would be fun if he got hit and becomes disabled. Cue a few years later, he's a billionaire on a vendetta to nuke gods from the comfort of his hospital bed.
 

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I planned to do this temporarily for an isekai. I'm not sure when I'll get around to it though.
The plan is just that he's so unlucky in his life that he's already used to dodging accidents so pretty much every isekai trick just fails like it was just another day to him. I was even considering going as far as to make the god hire assassins, have a pre-transfer arc of mc managing to defeat them, and then making the god finally lose it and come down to do it themselves.
 

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So he... is unkillable?

I mean, think about it. If there is an afterlife, that means you're isekai'ed there when you die. That means that, if you cannot be isekai'ed, you're a true immortal because you ain't ever leaving here.

(This logic is a bit shakier if there's no afterlife, but there's an angle to discuss whether 'nothing at all' is also a kind of different realm.)
So the idea is that he isn't actually invincible, He's literally just a normal guy like all isekai protagonists.
So he... is unkillable?

I mean, think about it. If there is an afterlife, that means you're isekai'ed there when you die. That means that, if you cannot be isekai'ed, you're a true immortal because you ain't ever leaving here.

(This logic is a bit shakier if there's no afterlife, but there's an angle to discuss whether 'nothing at all' is also a kind of different realm.)
But maybe if at some point he loses and actually gets sent to the realm, Because he avoided it for so long the realm could be overtaken by the villain and be trying to rise to the surface.
I planned to do this temporarily for an isekai. I'm not sure when I'll get around to it though.
The plan is just that he's so unlucky in his life that he's already used to dodging accidents so pretty much every isekai trick just fails like it was just another day to him. I was even considering going as far as to make the god hire assassins, have a pre-transfer arc of mc managing to defeat them, and then making the god finally lose it and come down to do it themselves.
The idea I have is similar to the randomness of Dandadan, Which I have never watched and will not so that I can't understand it.

The idea is that there is a shadow government of telepathic semi trucks that are spiritual guides to realms in need and the MC disrupted the natural order of their work and now has a target on his back.
 

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It would be better to work like The Job...

Similar to Heist.

The Moth Mommy in Heaven dispatched her two greatest agents, Truck-kun and Little Girl, to Isekai the un-Isekaiable man.
 

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Made the first chapter if anybody wants to give it half a read.
 
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