Izumi_Kenshu
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What are your thoughts on my Prologue and Chapter 1?
Ps: Please don't mind about the grammar.
Ps: Please don't mind about the grammar.
Thoughts and feedbacks on my story.
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Admirers_Quill
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I will do a review swap if you want
Little-Moon
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I wouldn't mind a review swap either :) if you are open for one.
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Little-Moon
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If you don't mind could you send in the link for your story :) ?
Kinda can't access the links in signatures, sorry.
Aye then I'll do that :) the story I would like to Review is:
JING – The last Archmages
Children have gone missing, and the same unknown entity has gruesomely murdered a high-ranking Noble. There are rumors about the wrath of Gods, a vengeful ghost wreaking havoc as more and more evil happens even in broad daylight on the streets, and a rumor is going about a curse lying...