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[Slay]

I'm happy to help review ONE CHAPTER of any story that fits the following requirements:

ONLY stories that fit into the contemporary romance or the fantasy romance genre.

NO smut, isekai, fanfiction, or any of that bullshit. (No offense, but yes offense.)

They MUST be appropriate for a YA audience, e.g. no rape.

I'll read ONE CHAPTER of each story. You absolutely MUST provide a link here, since I'm not going to waste my scarce, precious, scarce, valuable, scarce, importante, scarce- did I mention scarce? -time searching for your story. I can leave a review, or give you feedback in the comments. Please tell me which one you prefer.

Why am I doing this? I don't know. I'm bored, and I can't be bored, or I'll be boring.

 

[LoneQuack]

No offense but if you are bored then your time is not scarce...

 

[greyblob]

No offense but if you are bored then your time is not scarce...

based ducker

 

[Slay]

No offense but if you are bored then your time is not scarce...

Another thing about me is that I am a self-contradicting, somewhat annoying, and a bit hypocritical. A few spoiler alerts on my personality. But I don't care. ?‍. If you don't like someone as slayey as me, then that sounds like a you problem.

 

[Nolff]

I'm happy to help review ONE CHAPTER of any story that fits the following requirements:

ONLY stories that fit into the contemporary romance or the fantasy romance genre.

NO smut, isekai, fanfiction, or any of that bullshit. (No offense, but yes offense.)

They MUST be appropriate for a YA audience, e.g. no rape.

I'll read ONE CHAPTER of each story. You absolutely MUST provide a link here, since I'm not going to waste my scarce, precious, scarce, valuable, scarce, importante, scarce- did I mention scarce? -time searching for your story. I can leave a review, or give you feedback in the comments. Please tell me which one you prefer.

Why am I doing this? I don't know. I'm bored, and I can't be bored, or I'll be boring.

Boring requirements, and crappy requests.

W-Wha- No- No Fanfic?

 

[KoyukiMegumi]

Eh, mine is romance/fantasy and is in somewhat present times/futuristic? But in another world that isn't our Earth. It isn't Isekai. Anyways, I'll give you the link and you can choose to read it or not since I'm not sure if it fits your needs. First chapter isn't anything gore or dark other than setting certain themes. There is smut but that isn't until later chapters aka when they grow up, just part of the romance really not porn for porn, but I don't think you'll get that far since its only first chapter review.

There is child abuse within it, which isn't glorified, just a psycho taking out their frustrations on that who can't protect itself. Again don't think you'll get that far but just letting you know, if you do wish to read more. Wrote this in my YA years so very much is YA.

The Gate of Shadows

You can do any type of feedback you wish. Thanks for your time!

 

[CharlesEBrown]

I'm happy to help review ONE CHAPTER of any story that fits the following requirements:

ONLY stories that fit into the contemporary romance or the fantasy romance genre.

Hmm... what about one that kind of skirts the fantasy romance genre (though the romance side doesn't really kick in until chapter two), though it is not a focus of the story, just a part of it?

Ah heck, even have a contemporary romance sitting around on my Google Drive but not sure it's ready to be shared anywhere.

 

[Slay]

Hmm... what about one that kind of skirts the fantasy romance genre (though the romance side doesn't really kick in until chapter two), though it is not a focus of the story, just a part of it?

Ah heck, even have a contemporary romance sitting around on my Google Drive but not sure it's ready to be shared anywhere.

I'm happy to take a look at either or both of them. If I particularly enjoy it, I may read more than one chapter.

Boring requirements, and crappy requests.

W-Wha- No- No Fanfic?

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Slay. I'm happy to help. Someone's jealous I took his place as youngest. ._.

Eh, mine is romance/fantasy and is in somewhat present times/futuristic? But in another world that isn't our Earth. It isn't Isekai. Anyways, I'll give you the link and you can choose to read it or not since I'm not sure if it fits your needs. First chapter isn't anything gore or dark other than setting certain themes. There is smut but that isn't until later chapters aka when they grow up, just part of the romance really not porn for porn, but I don't think you'll get that far since its only first chapter review.

There is child abuse within it, which isn't glorified, just a psycho taking out their frustrations on that who can't protect itself. Again don't think you'll get that far but just letting you know, if you do wish to read more. Wrote this in my YA years so very much is YA.

The Gate of Shadows

You can do any type of feedback you wish. Thanks for your time!

Sure! Let me take a look.

 

[CharlesEBrown]

I'm happy to take a look at either or both of them. If I particularly enjoy it, I may read more than one chapter.

Well, the first chapter of Between Worlds is pending approval. The other one may take a while...

Edit: Between Worlds | Scribble Hub was approved. Only one chapter up yet. But at least this one has a cover... :D

 

[KoyukiMegumi]

Sure! Let me take a look.

Thank you for your kind words! I know my work isn't perfect which is why I keep trying to improve, but I'm glad you were able to enjoy it!

 

[Rookieqw]

I'm happy to help review ONE CHAPTER of any story that fits the following requirements:

ONLY stories that fit into the contemporary romance or the fantasy romance genre.

NO smut, isekai, fanfiction, or any of that bullshit. (No offense, but yes offense.)

They MUST be appropriate for a YA audience, e.g. no rape.

I'll read ONE CHAPTER of each story. You absolutely MUST provide a link here, since I'm not going to waste my scarce, precious, scarce, valuable, scarce, importante, scarce- did I mention scarce? -time searching for your story. I can leave a review, or give you feedback in the comments. Please tell me which one you prefer.

Why am I doing this? I don't know. I'm bored, and I can't be bored, or I'll be boring.

Thanks for your offer. If I understand correctly, the chapter can be from any place in the story as long as it doesn't get confusing, right? If so, then I'd like your opinion on whether Marco and Cordi seem like friends, on the flaws in my style, and on how badly the chapter is written in general (I'm not a good writer, but criticism can at least point me in the right direction): https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1042505-hordedoom/chapter/1154166/

 

[LoneQuack]

Another thing about me is that I am a self-contradicting, somewhat annoying, and a bit hypocritical. A few spoiler alerts on my personality. But I don't care. ?‍. If you don't like someone as slayey as me, then that sounds like a you problem.

Buddy relax, I am not after you, everyone (to some extent) is self-contradicting, but saying its other people problem when its on you... well, that's a different matter.

 

[SiaoyueM]

Oh thank you so much for your offer, I have one Romantic/Historical fiction, No rape, No smut etc.
You can choose once, so you like.
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1229507/return-of-the-villains-wife/

 

[Slay]

Buddy relax, I am not after you, everyone (to some extent) is self-contradicting, but saying its other people problem when its on you... well, that's a different matter.

:D it's not like I'm ever serious about anything.

Seriously. Don't take me seriously.

What did I just say...

Well, the first chapter of Between Worlds is pending approval. The other one may take a while...

Edit: Between Worlds | Scribble Hub was approved. Only one chapter up yet. But at least this one has a cover... :D

Okay, I'll take a look!

Thank you for your kind words! I know my work isn't perfect which is why I keep trying to improve, but I'm glad you were able to enjoy it!

Of course! No one's writing is perfect; there's always room for improvement. I'm happy to offer my feedback to help out a little.

Thanks for your offer. If I understand correctly, the chapter can be from any place in the story as long as it doesn't get confusing, right? If so, then I'd like your opinion on whether Marco and Cordi seem like friends, on the flaws in my style, and on how badly the chapter is written in general (I'm not a good writer, but criticism can at least point me in the right direction): https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1042505-hordedoom/chapter/1154166/

Alright, I'll take a look at it and tell you what I think.

 

[daicho]

I'm happy to help review ONE CHAPTER of any story that fits the following requirements:

ONLY stories that fit into the contemporary romance or the fantasy romance genre.

NO smut, isekai, fanfiction, or any of that bullshit. (No offense, but yes offense.)

They MUST be appropriate for a YA audience, e.g. no rape.

I'll read ONE CHAPTER of each story. You absolutely MUST provide a link here, since I'm not going to waste my scarce, precious, scarce, valuable, scarce, importante, scarce- did I mention scarce? -time searching for your story. I can leave a review, or give you feedback in the comments. Please tell me which one you prefer.

Why am I doing this? I don't know. I'm bored, and I can't be bored, or I'll be boring.

The Beast of Nosiris

Nosiris is an isolated region on the fringes of the known world, cut off by natural barriers that both protect—and imprison—its inhabitants. Nosiris is a land few understand. At its heart lies Kampest, a remote city where the Blackwell family reigns supreme, their influence suffocating all who...

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The Beast of Nosiris

Check out my story! I've just released the prologue, and I'm actively working on the next chapters. Chapter 1 is almost ready to upload, so stay tuned for updates. I'd love to hear your thoughts—feel free to share any feedback or constructive criticism in the comments. Your support means a lot! I have big plans for this project and will do my best to deliver quality content.

This is a dark low fantasy horror, not an isekai. Please look at the tags and genre to get an idea of things to come.