yes this story

[JustKidding]

yes someone please review first two chapter of story and feedback. thank

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1066243/i-can-infinitely-respawn/

 

[J_Chemist]

Poyo

 

[Nolff]

First of all, just from how you type your request, I can see that you don't have a good understanding of grammar.

I suggest you to learn some english text books bout English in your country language.

Poyo

So, Kirby, why are you here?

 

[JustKidding]

Poyo

yes poyo yes yes yes

First of all, just from how you type your request, I can see that you don't have a good understanding of grammar.

I suggest you to learn some english text books bout English in your country language.

 

[Nolff]

Ok... I take it back. Now I feel suspicious.

So, how's your writing ugly in this thread while in the story, you wrote good s#it?

 

[JustKidding]

Ok... I take it back. Now I feel suspicious.

dont be

So, how's your writing ugly in this thread while in the story, you wrote good s#it?

thank. you are goodperson

 

[Nolff]

Please tell me you're not a troll.

I will be convinced that you're still bad at writing if you say so.

dont be



thank. you are goodperson

Seriously, do tell.

 

[JustKidding]

Please tell me you're not a troll.

I will be convinced that you're still bad at writing if you say so.

Seriously, do tell.

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[J_Chemist]

So, Kirby, why are you here?

Poyo?

 

[NOTkaosin21]

story brought a tear to my eyes. what a masterpiece

 

[Nolff]

Poyo?

story brought a tear to my eyes. what a masterpiece

Which one, dummy? This or someone else's?

 

[NOTkaosin21]

Which one, dummy? This or someone else's?

im talking about the masterpiece, of course.

 

[Nolff]

im talking about the masterpiece, of course.

Specify, or

 

[JustKidding]

Specify, or

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haha where you find so many meme

 

[Nolff]

I'm gonna keep asking for you to elaborate with me and gives out the weird writing pattern topic's excuses.

haha where you find so many meme

Magicians don't reveal their tricks...

Also,

 

[JustKidding]

I'm gonna keep asking for you to elaborate with me and gives out the weird writing pattern topic's excuses.

what??

 

[Nolff]

what??

Basically...

You typed like these here in the thread.

haha where you find so many meme

But in your story, you wrote like an average english learner. So, why is that?

 

[JustKidding]

Basically...

You typed like these here in the thread.


But in your story, you wrote like an average english learner. So, why is that?

the demons

 

[Nolff]

the demons

 

[JustKidding]

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im just messing with you man