SHF High-school Fanfic

[Deleted member 146224]

He has to write an actual chapter, I'm not convinced otherwise, (fighting Ssemouy doesn't count since she'd probably let him win or Matcha would have the opportunity for Talk-no-Jutsu)

It flew over your head so high that it left the solar system at this point ┬┴┬┴┤ ͜ʖ ͡°) ├┬┴┬┴

 

[Deleted member 146224]

Funnily enough I never called myself eldritch but others just perceived me as eldritch, so now here I'm.
The only way a character like this one could become eldritch.

Tbh it's mostly Azure nominating people to Eldritch

 

[RepresentingDesire]

Tbh it's mostly Azure nominating people to Eldritch

Yes.

 

[MatchaChocolate69]

Only 3 ppl in the chart are eldritch You Voidiris and Azure, Danny counts as a goddess so she's not eldritch, Ssemouy as far as I'm aware isn't eldritch either and neither is Matcha and no having tentacles doesn't make you eldritch

I was blessed by Quagma. I am now the mad prophet of a multitude of eldritch deities: cosmic octopuses as many as the stars.

Two more hearts, to match our own trio of organs.

Resistance to Sanity and Abstraction. This will protect him further, not just from Our own passive effects, but also from the sheer madness permeating this place of learning.

Seven percent more luck, to increase his odds of success. Seven is a lucky number on its own, further increasing the effectiveness.

Matcha's Charm, maxed out as far as We can take it.

Overall defensive capability, raised by another five percent.

We even bestow Our Matcha with titles and new skills, ones that We feel will serve him well.

[Risktaker: Survive an encounter with something that is far beyond you. Ten percent more resistance to Sanity altering effects. Ten percent more defensive capability.]

[Wonka's Whimsy: Confections created by you can now have minor customizable supernatural effects. If cultivated properly, it has the potential to grow far more powerful.]

[Mad Chocolatier: You stared into the unknown, and the unknown stared back. Alterations of Reality have slightly less effect on you. Self explanatory, this one.]

[Blessing of Q: DATA UNAVAILABLE. This is a special one. It will allow Us to provide him with guidance in his growth.]

 

[MidnightFox]

It flew over your head so high that it left the solar system at this point ┬┴┬┴┤ ͜ʖ ͡°) ├┬┴┬┴

I don't buy poisoned radishes unlike Ssemouy (it's a reference to Snow White)

 

[MidnightFox]

I was blessed by Quagma. I am now the mad prophet of a multitude of eldritch deities: cosmic octopuses as many as the stars.

Then show me how you use your power in creative ways that don't involve flirting with girls playboy

 

[MatchaChocolate69]

There was already a fight scene between his tentacles and Ssemouy ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Nothing escapes my Ane-san. Especially the most embarrassing details

 

[Deleted member 146224]

I don't buy poisoned radishes unlike Ssemouy (it's a reference to Snow White)

1. It doesn't make sense
2. I'm not poisoned
3. Ssemouy for one has actually a good taste

Nothing escapes my Ane-san. Especially the most embarrassing details

There's nothing to be ashamed of, Matcha-kun It runs in the family

 

[MatchaChocolate69]

Then show me how you use your power in creative ways that don't involve flirting with girls playboy

So much hate! Wait for the next chapter

 

[TheMonotonePuppet]

Funnily enough I never called myself eldritch but others just perceived me as eldritch, so now here I'm.
The only way a character like this one could become eldritch.

Sorta same, but no one has called me eldritch within the context of the fiction. I think it is because I am not sinister.

 

[MidnightFox]

So much hate! Wait for the next chapter

I'm being logical not hateful
My reasoning
1) you haven't been featured in that many chapters, and when you appear in chapters it's for comedic purposes
2) all chapters you've written feature you being rejected by girls and dying
3) you have a unique ability yet it's not used in any way throughout the fanfic (hell you could literally go ahead and make your own reality marble (Fate reference) and us it in combat you could even make idk golems out of chocolate)
4) you could have been a great villain in my eyes but what I've mentioned in the clauses above ruins it

 

[Theirl]

Guys.

On the newspaper issue 4, Rhaps' face description felt like an alternate from TMC.

A fully assimilated alternate, I'm afraid.

There is no face in the issue 4

 

[Deleted member 146224]

I'm being logical not hateful
My reasoning
1) you haven't been featured in that many chapters, and when you appear in chapters it's for comedic purposes
2) all chapters you've written feature you being rejected by girls and dying
3) you have a unique ability yet it's not used in any way throughout the fanfic (hell you could literally go ahead and make your own reality marble (Fate reference) and us it in combat you could even make idk golems out of chocolate)
4) you could have been a great villain in my eyes but what I've mentioned in the clauses above ruins it

How does this has anything to do with being Eldritch? It's your own subjective thing to define one only based on marysueing a fight.

 

[RepresentingDesire]

Sorta same, but no one has called me eldritch within the context of the fiction. I think it is because I am not sinister.

Maybe because before Tsuru and Botty made me an winged eye and many said that it was eldritch and the character lore is "I'm what the others perceive". You are more a Chucky Doll than anything else and that's of course it's own kind of horror but that's nothing against the horror of all flesh being one, time, perception and whatever DTD is.

 

[MidnightFox]

How does this has anything to do with being Eldritch? It's your own subjective thing to define one only based on marysueing a fight.

I don't see it that way, there's a whole bunch of fairy tales he could have used to develop his power, for reference: Alice in wonderland, Jack and the Beanstalk, Hensel and Gretel etc. And I don't mean in terms of combat, and also he doesn't try to trick ppl into eating his chocolate despite the fact he's considered a villain

 

[Deleted member 146224]

I don't see it that way, there's a whole bunch of fairy tales he could have used to develop his power, for reference: Alice in wonderland, Jack and the Beanstalk, Hensel and Gretel etc. And I don't mean in terms of combat, and also he doesn't try to trick ppl into eating his chocolate despite the fact he's considered a villain

A lot of the issues stem from the fact that chapters are 5000 light years behind forum lore-wise, so it takes some time to properly tie thing together. Also before that there was a lot of establishing characters etc.

 

[MatchaChocolate69]

@DannyTheDaikon
Sneak peek

"Hehe~ Good daikon~" she responds, taking her hand.

Reasserting her possession, Azure pulls the woman into a passionate embrace.

Their faces are very close.
Their lips almost touch.
Their eyes meet each other's.

Ssemouy blushes witnessing the intimacy of the two women.
Even as silhouette without color, the blush on her cheeks is perceptible.

"You're so cute!" Danny whispers sweetly.

"I'm not cute~" Azure responds mischievously.

 

[RepresentingDesire]

I don't see it that way, there's a whole bunch of fairy tales he could have used to develop his power, for reference: Alice in wonderland, Jack and the Beanstalk, Hensel and Gretel etc. And I don't mean in terms of combat, and also he doesn't try to trick ppl into eating his chocolate despite the fact he's considered a villain

Well until now eldritch had concept or ideologies that embodied them.
SRB had monoism and flesh.
Azure had time and causality.
I had perception and basically information.
I don't know what DTD has but yeah.
Maybe search for something your character could embody?
Like history or fiction?
I don't know the full context, so whatever.

Goodnight.

 

[TheMonotonePuppet]

Maybe because before Tsuru and Botty made me an winged eye and many said that it was eldritch and the character lore is "I'm what the others perceive". You are more a Chucky Doll than anything else and that's of course it's own kind of horror but that's nothing against the horror of all flesh being one, time, perception and whatever DTD is.

True! I guess most don't consider my puppeteers when thinking about me!

 

[MidnightFox]

A lot of the issues stem from the fact that chapters are 5000 light years behind forum lore-wise, so it takes some time to properly tie thing together. Also before that there was a lot of establishing characters etc.

The other thing i wanted to point out is that his alter ego gets a better development personality wise compared to his villain persona