Adventurer's Guild Adventurer's Guild - OOC Room

[Nahrenne]

Maybe try taking a break to refresh your mind? For me drinking tea also helps refresh my mind.

I've been taking tons of breaks.
>w<

Actually, I've reached a point in the report where I'm unsure if certain characters would actually do what I've made them do...
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[Silver]

Yeah, my problem is the flow is intermittent and dries up in some parts, requiring some pumping from reservoirs so it doesn't die completely.
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Yeah, flow is a pain to deal with it. You can only try to edit it away. Changing words or shortening or lengthening parts with word choice helps. An useful source for this is power thesaurus. But, it's still more of a trail and error things. It used to take me 20 edits in and out for me to make anything decent looking. A lot less now maybe ten but still quite a lot.

But like Epsil said, if you're feeling tired of writing you should take a break it's harder to notice flow problems when you low on energy.

 

[Nahrenne]

Thanks~ I'll go rework it out now. Be right back

I forgot to say that I thought he looked nice and smexy, though.
(^-^)

*loves a man in uniform*

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[Fossil]

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I feel it's on the OP side in terms of equipment.
Not sure entirely what the skills would end up entailing...so a maybe on those.

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I’m waiting on approval from Ohko before anything.

 

[Epsil]

I forgot to say that I thought he looked nice and smexy, though.
(^-^)

*loves a man in uniform*

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Character Profile - Alias

Gender Male Race Half - Elf Sub Class Doctor Level 1 (0/200 EXP) Age 19 Class Private Investigator Sub Class Money 0 Quest History Personality: Brave, Smart, Very Curious, Cold, Blunt, Mischievous, Egotistical, Logical, Stubborn Appearance Information View attachment 2001 Background Alias is a descendant of an |Other Worlder|. His dad was a famous doctor from the year of 2485?, his mom an elf. His dad wanted him to be a doctor, but Alias wanted to become a Private Detective (like the ones in his dads picture books (OOC: manga)). He also displayed exceptional talent. Solving a lot of conspiracies and mysteries in the town. Nonetheless, Alias became a doctor at the early age of 14, and worked there for 2 years. He still wanted to become a private detective though, so he decided to leave. His father gifted him with a gun, and some money. His first destination... Scribel. Afterall, theres a certain organisation thats been active there. Inventory Skills Item Description Amount Smith and Wessen .500 A Pistol, comes with a holster. Currently fully loaded. .500 bullets 8 Modern Clothes Stylish, made of silk. Leather Shoulder Bag Item Description Amount Herbalists equipment Typical stuff Skill Description Genius Learns things super fast, Possesses a lot of knowledge. Medicine ++ |Lvl 6| Alias knows various methods to apply medicine High medical knowledge (From the year 2485) High magical medical knowledge (The world's curriculum as well as his fathers insights.) Can create a lot of medicine. Herbology |Lvl 6| Knowledge on plants, and how to use them in medicine. Alchemy |Lvl 2| A small bit of alchemy is needed to produce medicine. Polygraph |Lvl 1| Alias is able to tell if a target is being truthful or not as well as hear their heart beat. For the ability to work: Alias must be touching their skin.

Thanks. How about now? May nerf down Medicine and Herbology a bit.

 

[ohko]

Done my minor bits of formatting and back to my quest~

Oh! If you add new entries to the website wiki -- make sure you also bump it in the Forum Library.

We really count on the Forum Library as source material for the Website Library!

 

[Nahrenne]

Thanks. How about now? May nerf down Medicine and Herbology a bit.

Yeah, I think it looks okay.
I mean, the description of the skills doesn't sound OP.
I personally don't see the point in writing a level for the skill, since it's the description that actually tells you how powerful it is.
^(Just my opinion)

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[Silver]

I've been taking tons of breaks.
>w<

Actually, I've reached a point in the report where I'm unsure if certain characters would actually do what I've made them do...
orz

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Aye I've had the same problem. The only thing you can do is A) edit it and read it over until it looks right, or B) Wing it, look at it and say it's all your master plan.

B is the approach I take for AG. A is well not going so well for me since I look at the first chapter of things I write and then the writing on the second. And, say how does these two even look alike forgetting the work that went into the first.

 

[Epsil]

Yeah, I think it looks okay.
I mean, the description of the skills doesn't sound OP.
I personally don't see the point in writing a level for the skill, since it's the description that actually tells you how powerful it is.
^(Just my opinion)

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True, I wanted to do it like Vysic's Character sheet. But the formatting on that...
Also I re-edited it again

 

[Nahrenne]

Aye I've had the same problem. The only thing you can do is A) edit it and read it over until it looks right, or B) Wing it, look at it and say it's all your master plan.

B is the approach I take for AG. A is well not going so well for me since I look at the first chapter of things I write and then the writing on the second. And, say how does these two even look alike forgetting the work that went into the first.

Okay, I'll ask about the situation in my report.
Liana can't do the training properly due to being nocturnal and the training happening during the day.
At noon, she collapses no matter what.
The situation at the moment in the report is the person in charge of the training is going to change her routine so she does the teamwork stuff in the evening, while training on her own during the night when everyone else is asleep.
I wasn't sure if the guards would actually do that, or if they'd just tell her to grin and bear it like everyone else...
orz

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[Silver]

True, I wanted to do it like Vysic's Character sheet. But the formatting on that...
Also I re-edited it again

Okay, whoa the potential scaling on that terrifying. I already see upgrade paths.

 

[Epsil]

Okay, whoa the potential scaling on that terrifying. I already see upgrade paths.

Shhhhhh. I have plans.

 

[Silver]

Shhhhhh. I have plans.

 

[Epsil]

Okay, whoa the potential scaling on that terrifying. I already see upgrade paths.

He's going to have to learn swordsmanship or something though, the gun doesn't have many bullets. If he's at gelderholm he could probably make bullets but until then ?

 

[Nahrenne]

True, I wanted to do it like Vysic's Character sheet. But the formatting on that...
Also I re-edited it again

I think it's okay.
I don't know how you'll scale it, though.

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[Yorth]

@AliceShiki @Yorth @Silver

Spoiler: Chibi

View attachment 2006

I know I suck at chibi art but here's a little outline of our characters xD

I'll add colour and some more detail when I have more time, this is just a WIP really, but I thought I might as well show you guys before I head to bed since I'm not sure when I'll be able to work more on it ^^

That is so CUTE!

 

[Silver]

Okay, I'll ask about the situation in my report.
Liana can't do the training properly due to being nocturnal and the training happening during the day.
At noon, she collapses no matter what.
The situation at the moment in the report is the person in charge of the training is going to change her routine so she does the teamwork stuff in the evening, while training on her own during the night when everyone else is asleep.
I wasn't sure if the guards would actually do that, or if they'd just tell her to grin and bear it like everyone else...
orz

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Honestly it's kinda difficult. To do this quest without going out of character. I can see a couple of paths but the one that stands out for me at least is abusing a theme of her not wanting to reach out for help of strangers or not wanting reveal that she isn't human. And, on the upside, it suits the quest to a T.

Don't know if it's in character for the AG character in particular since I haven't been reading too much of the reports or freestyle stuff lately and have been way to lazy to try to catch up.

 

[Epsil]

I think it's okay.
I don't know how you'll scale it, though.

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He can scale his medical knowledge by learning about other species bodies. and magical medicine knowledge by other means, eventually he'll incorporate it into his combat.

Polygraph can be scaled a good bit (not telling though),

Herbalism will be scaled via making better stuff.

His other skills will be scaled depending on what kind of character he wants to be.

He's not meant to be a good character. He's meant to be a sort of grey area.

 

[Epsil]

Okay, I'll ask about the situation in my report.
Liana can't do the training properly due to being nocturnal and the training happening during the day.
At noon, she collapses no matter what.
The situation at the moment in the report is the person in charge of the training is going to change her routine so she does the teamwork stuff in the evening, while training on her own during the night when everyone else is asleep.
I wasn't sure if the guards would actually do that, or if they'd just tell her to grin and bear it like everyone else...
orz

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They should do it, there are guards 24/7, so there must be guards who also have that time schedule.

 

[Nahrenne]

Honestly it's kinda difficult. To do this quest without going out of character. I can see a couple of paths but the one that stands out for me at least is abusing a theme of her not wanting to reach out for help of strangers or not wanting reveal that she isn't human. And, on the upside, it suits the quest to a T.

Don't know if it's in character for the AG character in particular since I haven't been reading too much of the reports or freestyle stuff lately and have been way to lazy to try to catch up.

Mm...
Recent ss's Hejlikka and Julrik know she's a vampire.
Solet'Luna found out after Liana accidentally put it in her report due to absentmindedness while writing it, but she ran away before Luna could get her mitts on her.
Harrison, the guard captain, told her to take the city guard training since he noticed she didn't have a weapon or know how to fight.
As for the quest, she told Harrison she wasn't a day person, hence why she prefers to do the night shifts for quests.

So...with that in mind, would you have her still need to do day training with everyone else, or have Harrison discuss with the head instructor to change her itinerary?
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You can give a different solution, if you can think of one - a fresh route would be appreciated.
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