SHF High-school Fanfic

[Nahrenne]

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In other words...a cringefest?

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[Deleted member 146224]

In other words...a cringefest?

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[TheMonotonePuppet]

In other words...a cringefest?

X

Exactly! Bingo! Ding-ding-ding! Let's give this lady a prize! (I only have confetti and party stickers... but here's the prize...)

 

[SsemouyOnan]

Every hero turns into a villain eventually, and there haven't been any exceptions as far as I'm aware

There are plenty of exceptions
some are right in my basement, actually

 

[Nahrenne]

Exactly! Bingo! Ding-ding-ding! Let's give this lady a prize! (I only have confetti and party stickers... but here's the prize...)

*huggles*
\(^o^)/

*gives you some tiramisu she made*

X

 

[TheMonotonePuppet]

Don't worry, Danny.
I am cringe.
You are cringe.
We are cringe.
They are cringe.
All is cringe.
Right, @Sola-sama , my peer in the Cringe Society?

 

[TheMonotonePuppet]

*huggles*
\(^o^)/

*gives you some tiramisu she made*

X

*delicately eats and savors the tiramisu* this puppet LOVES tiramisu, so there shall be no uncouth scarfing down of the meal. It deserves proper enjoyment! *British accent*

 

[MidnightFox]

Big strong Boi!
Show off those muscles!


*stares at the muscles being worked hard*


Reminds me of Leylin from [Warlock of the Magus World]
'-'
In the latter half of the story for the flying thing

Minus the red stuff, that looks really beautiful.
Though, I'm not sure how comfortable the handle would be.

X

It's a blade i used my own blood to make, so of course it has to have some red

 

[MidnightFox]

some are right in my basement, actually

Not even surprised, for some reason

 

[Nahrenne]

It's a blade i used my own blood to make, so of course it has to have some red

*faints*

...x...

 

[SRB]

You can always wear skin-tight/form-fitting clothes

*goes into the corner*

Dear journal, today someone almost convinced me to become eye-candy...

It's 1300+ chapters long, if I recall
And there's a bit of harem in it
Ah, but the harem members don't hang around him
It's more like he visits them when he wants to, and they can't really do anything about it
And he can leave them for hundreds of years at a time sometimes.

Apart from that, I think the story is solid.
Just ignore how the author describes female characters compared with male characters.

X

Two words about males and entire chapters about females?

 

[Nahrenne]

*goes into the corner*

Dear journal, today someone almost convinced me to become eye-candy...

You already are, with the way you've described yourself

Two words about males and entire chapters about females?

More like...
For a female character:
Her skin was white as milk and looked like it would be soft to the touch. Her clothes did nothing to hide the large chest she had, and her lovely legs showed through the slit of her tight-fitting dress. She walked while swaying her hips seductively as if it were second nature, wanting to entice all those who saw her subconsciously.

For a male character:
He was in a green suit and had brown hair. He was tall and looked like he held a lot of power.

I guess what I'm trying to say is, the female characters tend to get over-sexualised while the male ones are just described as is.

X

 

[Iamnotabot]

Cuddles for all you lonely creatue out there, i am comfortable with the chap i write but could it be any better if i made it the 3k version ?

 

[SRB]

You already are, with the way you've described yourself

I am stronk! But thin as hell.

More like...
For a female character:
Her skin was white as milk and looked like it would be soft to the touch. Her clothes did nothing to hide the large chest she had, and her lovely legs showed through the slit of her tight-fitting dress. She walked while swaying her hips seductively as if it were second nature, wanting to entice all those who saw her subconsciously.

For a male character:
He was in a green suit and had brown hair. He was tall and looked like he held a lot of power.

I guess what I'm trying to say is, the female characters tend to get over-sexualised while the male ones are just described as is.

X

For some reason, I'm not surpried.

 

[SRB]

Cuddles for all you lonely creatue out there, i am comfortable with the chap i write but could it be any better if i made it the 3k version ?

It would be interesting to read, considering that almost every other chapter is chaos. A nice change of pace

 

[Iamnotabot]

It would be interesting to read, considering that almost every other chapter is chaos. A nice change of pace

Yeah, well it got lots of stuf in there. From Envy and Ellie beating up sola. To me and Ria having fluffy segs, hell i even made Nahrenne the one behind sola attack to draw me to the libary with Ria.

But i decided not to do it and keep only the fluff.

 

[Stealthy_Enigma]

This thread is turning into my lunchtime entertainment~

So much chaos~

˝/\⁠⁠__/\˝
(⁠⁠⁠✿;≧∇≦;)

Well, gotta go now~

I will see everyone in another couple hours~

˝/\__/\˝ ⊂\✨️
(✿≧ᆺ≦)_| |
| |/♡♡\˙˙˙˙˙˙˙✨️
U|♡♡♡|✨️
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[Nahrenne]

I am stronk! But thin as hell.

So svelte?
A lean, mean, muscle machine.

For some reason, I'm not surpried.

I mean...it is a CN so...
Apart from that, the actual story is really good.

To me and Ria having fluffy segs

What is fluffy segs?
Segues?
Segments?

hell i even made Nahrenne the one behind sola attack to draw me to the libary with Ria.

I don't quite understand what this means...

X

 

[RepresentingDesire]

Every hero turns into a villain eventually, and there haven't been any exceptions as far as I'm aware

Yes tsureu always said that If you long long enougfhh xou will trun intro a cvillain so you should die young but to never be vorn is Sion mxush bettter.

You can always wear skin-tight/form-fitting clothes


It's 1300+ chapters long, if I recall
And there's a bit of harem in it
Ah, but the harem members don't hang around him
It's more like he visits them when he wants to, and they can't really do anything about it
And he can leave them for hundreds of years at a time sometimes.

Apart from that, I think the story is solid.
Just ignore how the author describes female characters compared with male characters.

X

Sxoxcund slik etga average windderdul wsnamngamnage..

In other words...a cringefest?

X

weird ssdmuzt dexd it sdhpil DB e .

Exactly! Bingo! Ding-ding-ding! Let's give this lady a prize! (I only have confetti and party stickers... but here's the prize...)

wfow how wongdetfrdfrul,,.,t,t,,,,

*huggles*
\(^o^)/

*gives you some tiramisu she made*

X

yyummmmynmmmy

Two words about males and entire chapters about females?

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You already are, with the way you've described yourself


More like...
For a female character:
Her skin was white as milk and looked like it would be soft to the touch. Her clothes did nothing to hide the large chest she had, and her lovely legs showed through the slit of her tight-fitting dress. She walked while swaying her hips seductively as if it were second nature, wanting to entice all those who saw her subconsciously.

For a male character:
He was in a green suit and had brown hair. He was tall and looked like he held a lot of power.

I guess what I'm trying to say is, the female characters tend to get over-sexualised while the male ones are just described as is.

X

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Yeah, well it got lots of stuf in there. From Envy and Ellie beating up sola. To me and Ria having fluffy segs, hell i even made Nahrenne the one behind sola attack to draw me to the libary with Ria.

But i decided not to do it and keep only the fluff.

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This thread is turning into my lunchtime entertainment~

So much chaos~

˝/\⁠⁠__/\˝
(⁠⁠⁠✿;≧∇≦;)
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Well, gotta go now~

I will see everyone in another couple hours~

˝/\__/\˝ ⊂\✨️
(✿≧ᆺ≦)_| |
| |/♡♡\˙˙˙˙˙˙˙✨️
U|♡♡♡|✨️
✨️|˙|˙|˙|˙˙
__ U_U_____

Isn<ÄÄt that's truly wonderfcdukg.

So svelte?
A lean, mean, muscle machine.

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What is fluffy segs?
Segues?
Segments?

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[Nahrenne]

Sxoxcund slik etga average windderdul wsnamngamnage..

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weird ssdmuzt dexd it sdhpil DB e .

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qsounds apnboutr dighthn.

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How xyummb dx nononnoMOMMNONOHBbnoiItsss dufly so sugly so szuykö yuyljkjyukylnujyyj

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<HARAYVGDHOREVDXS DFDBDFDDSSMS

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