TsumiHokiro
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The more you read, the less you understand...
SHF High-school Fanfic
- Thread starter Corty
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SsemouyOnan
Black cherry flavoured redshift
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Huff... puff... took me almost a week but its finally its over. Not. I still have to edit and proofread before I send my submission to Corty. Oh well.
Tried to include a bit of everyone in my chap, but I will admit that it's sort of unbalanced with some receiving multiple lines of dialogue and some only getting a cameo(though it's mostly those seat 40>, since I had to add them retroactively). Still, here's a list of scenes without context to show how I distributed everyone.
-Overall Narration - Me
-Opening Sequence – Narvii
-That One Anime Reference Everyone is tired of: Azmiran, En-Chan, Georgelee, Anon, Kraken, SaliusGebel
-Villainous Meet-Up (Gone
-Villainous Meet-Up (Gone Wrong) – Matcha, Ellie, Luior, Cortavar, Cupcakeninja, Neon Armstrong Cyclone Jet Armstrong Cannon, iamnotabot, Redemit
A scene where I pick a fight with a literal snail: 2wordsperminute
-Eldritch Luncheon: Voidiris, Azure, Boi, Neverborn, Quagma
-Chill Zone: Paul, Ria, Kalliel, Tsumi, Archie
-Model Students Table: Corty, Assurbanipal, Nahrenne, Reina, Chemist, Melchi, Puppet
-The Bread Stand-Off: Sleds, Albus, Sola-sama
-The War Of The Golden Bread: (All from previous) Enigma, Aaqil, Hellohound, MidnightFox, Theirl, Bartun,
-*insert super smash bros meme*: Aurora
-Mexican Drug War: Rhaps, Kureous, Bouca, Darkness
-Nurse Scene: Ranron, Arcadia, Danny
-Opening Sequence – Narvii
-That One Anime Reference Everyone is tired of: Azmiran, En-Chan, Georgelee, Anon, Kraken, SaliusGebel
-Villainous Meet-Up (Gone
-Villainous Meet-Up (Gone Wrong) – Matcha, Ellie, Luior, Cortavar, Cupcakeninja, Neon Armstrong Cyclone Jet Armstrong Cannon, iamnotabot, Redemit
A scene where I pick a fight with a literal snail: 2wordsperminute
-Eldritch Luncheon: Voidiris, Azure, Boi, Neverborn, Quagma
-Chill Zone: Paul, Ria, Kalliel, Tsumi, Archie
-Model Students Table: Corty, Assurbanipal, Nahrenne, Reina, Chemist, Melchi, Puppet
-The Bread Stand-Off: Sleds, Albus, Sola-sama
-The War Of The Golden Bread: (All from previous) Enigma, Aaqil, Hellohound, MidnightFox, Theirl, Bartun,
-*insert super smash bros meme*: Aurora
-Mexican Drug War: Rhaps, Kureous, Bouca, Darkness
-Nurse Scene: Ranron, Arcadia, Danny
And here's a preview of the shenanigans I cooked up while writing this abomination of words.
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LuoirM
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WE boutta get a banger
Theirl
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Ofensive littering thats new
Sola-sama
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RepresentingDesire
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Well that's true for most things....
I think Matcha is one of the most consistent victims in the class.
MatchaChocolate69
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Seymour, you're useless! ????
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Please take care and don't overwork yourself!
SsemouyOnan
Black cherry flavoured redshift
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I try my best, ok? CupcakeNinja was just too stronk
Stay soft and warm *pat* (or was it stay safe and warm?)
Rhaps
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Take it easy.
MidnightFox
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Well i hope when this masterpiece of a chapter comes out we find out Which character interacts most with the others
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MidnightFox
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Kinda more interested in how the Character Relationships turn out more than anything
Especially knowing what i wrote
Especially knowing what i wrote
RepresentingDesire
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Azure is going to commit omnicide in a future.
Azure_Fog
More stabby, more happy~
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No.
Ehehehe~
this cannot end well
i should post a preview too~
Just wait until the stabby gang gets you~
likely. Wanna join~?
Azure_Fog
More stabby, more happy~
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Stabby chappy preview:
“Okay~ First let’s get rid of the janitor, otherwise we won’t be able to see the mess we make~”
“Oh, no, no, no, NO!!” A voice says, as if on cue. “I clean up after your mess every time. EVERY TIME. And then, we fight over who would win and neither of us can decide and yet we never fight and thus nobody actually wins except we both do because of timelines.”
The muscley man takes a deep breath and continues, “You’re always stabbing, stabbing, stabbing, with no regard for the areas around you. Some day I’ll write a chapter that’s only you in detention! I’ll kill you… I’ll kill you… I’LL KILL YOU!!!”
“Someone's mad~”
“This is quite entertaining.”
“ENDEED!!”
“Your codename is Red, right~? It’s just like blood!” I yell as I charge directly at him, my dagger (named Scarlet Apple) drawn. “Let’s settle this, at least for this chapter!”
“No more messes!” he yells in kind, pulling a mop and shotgun out of nowhere. “DIE!”
I swing my knife at his mop, but he somehow manages to block it. With one hand holding back my knife, he aimed the shotgun at my head. Pulling the trigger, he shouts, “I got you now!”
“Nope~” I say as I teleport away from the blast, directly above the janitor’s head.
“Should we interfere?” Void asks, observing the conflict.
“Nah,” Envy replies. “This is their fight.”
“But, that would bring about feelings of disappointment. It would be entertaining.”
“I don’t think you could if you tried.”
“It is odd, I cannot seem to bring myself to.”
“Oh, no, no, no, NO!!” A voice says, as if on cue. “I clean up after your mess every time. EVERY TIME. And then, we fight over who would win and neither of us can decide and yet we never fight and thus nobody actually wins except we both do because of timelines.”
The muscley man takes a deep breath and continues, “You’re always stabbing, stabbing, stabbing, with no regard for the areas around you. Some day I’ll write a chapter that’s only you in detention! I’ll kill you… I’ll kill you… I’LL KILL YOU!!!”
“Someone's mad~”
“This is quite entertaining.”
“ENDEED!!”
“Your codename is Red, right~? It’s just like blood!” I yell as I charge directly at him, my dagger (named Scarlet Apple) drawn. “Let’s settle this, at least for this chapter!”
“No more messes!” he yells in kind, pulling a mop and shotgun out of nowhere. “DIE!”
I swing my knife at his mop, but he somehow manages to block it. With one hand holding back my knife, he aimed the shotgun at my head. Pulling the trigger, he shouts, “I got you now!”
“Nope~” I say as I teleport away from the blast, directly above the janitor’s head.
“Should we interfere?” Void asks, observing the conflict.
“Nah,” Envy replies. “This is their fight.”
“But, that would bring about feelings of disappointment. It would be entertaining.”
“I don’t think you could if you tried.”
“It is odd, I cannot seem to bring myself to.”