I am open to listen to any critique.

[CosmicPrime]

https://www.webnovel.com/book/27616810208000105 Here's my novel, I am trying to make a different kind of Mc with a mind that helps him to achieve his goals. I am willing take any tips for anyone willing to read through my novel.

 

[Deleted member 84247]

https://www.webnovel.com/book/27616810208000105 Here's my novel, I am trying to make a different kind of Mc with a mind that helps him to achieve his goals. I am willing take any tips for anyone willing to read through my novel.

 

[RepresentingPride]

The wn forum is shit and full spam by bots, it's maybe for that we see some who link wn coming here.

 

[Kamelingil]

Spoiler: Just some pointless comment, don't mind it. It's not connected to your story, it's a critique about webnovel

Just as I expected when I saw that Webnovel link, it has the tag R18. Webnovel is being filled with horny stories nowadays, the trends has R18 tag, the popular genre also had R18. It's not even making my dragon arise, the horny scene is just mid than reading doujins.

 

[Ilikewaterkusa]

https://www.webnovel.com/book/27616810208000105 Here's my novel, I am trying to make a different kind of Mc with a mind that helps him to achieve his goals. I am willing take any tips for anyone willing to read through my novel.

Webnovel has botted views, so there's no reason for you to waste your time there