WaterFish
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Talentless Hero: The Chosen Hero Is Unqualified
Lex had become the Chosen Hero. However, he didn’t gain any talents or blessings. Instead, he mocked by his peers. No way such a person was a ‘Hero’ like his Job had stated. Job Class: ‘Hero’. Stigmata Gifts: None. Innate Gift: ‘Empty’. Future: Worse than even an F Rank....
I was starting my Magic Academy story with an apocalyptic event happening in a different city.
Just wanted to know whether I should make it short, fairly long, or simply as long as it needs.
Was wondering if dragging the initial apocalyptic event for too long might cause readers to feel bored or uninterested. I’m calling it an Academy story but the school the audience has seen until this point has been mostly closed off right now.
The main characters are running around in the midst of an outbreak and doing their own stuff.
Would this be too different from expectations and thus lose the reader’s attention?
That’s what I’m worried about.
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—Gallery: Celest Vagabond (Evil Principal)