Help this quack rap

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So I was bored and tried to make a rap but i got stuck after a bit so here i am asking you to help this duck continue his rap and quack.

Hello there!! Nice to meetchca,
Who am I ‽ I am the Quack-Doctah
the one and only, who got no competition
I am a duck with a mission with a Lil bit addiction
But don't you doubt my position because I am the king of prescription
I'm a master at my craft, no one can beat me
there ain't no sickness in the world that I got no remedy
my size is small but I got big skills
I'll fake your diagnosis, I'll sell you useless pills
I'll keep you sick, so that you pay them bills
I've got no compassion, I'll take everything till you're on your knees
 
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Quack-Doctah said:
So I was bored and tried to make a rap but i got stuck after a bit so here i am asking you to help this duck continue his rap and quack.

Hello there!! Nice to meetchca,
Who am I ‽ I am the Quack-Doctah
the one and only, who got no competition
I am a duck with a mission with a Lil bit addiction
But don't you doubt my position because I am the king of prescription
I'm a master at my craft, no one can beat me
there ain't no sickness in the world that I got no remedy
my size is small but I got big skills
I'll fake your diagnosis, I'll sell you useless pills
I'll keep you sick, so that you pay them bills
I've got no compassion, I'll take everything till you're on your knees
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Hmm, the rhyming is alright, but the flow is off.

I'm the quack doctah, and it's nice to meetcha. I'm the duck creatcha that need no featcha.

The one and only, mastah of my craft, an' a little chill at this thang called rappin'. Wrappin' duck with no compassion. Packin' these pills you get wrapped in.

You get hooked on 'em, cuz you need the therapy. Sellin' three pills to keep you sick. Till ya can't pay the bills on your housing shtick.

You'll liquidate your assets and call me a quack doctah, but I'll just duck and go to the rivah afta. And while you cry cuz ya bills be missin. I'll be like a duck at these shores fishin'.

Edit: Quick thing. Raps are not usually written in paragraph format, and they have verses between the choruses.
 
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