Re-writes were made.
Synopsis
After collapsing while engrossed in a reading binge, a teenage girl finds herself in the body of a character from a famous web novel.
Determined to rewrite her the character's fate, she must navigate the treacherous path of avoiding conflict with an overpowered heroine and her support crew. Things might not be that simple this time as the regressing heroine is a deadly missile driven by revenge, target locked on the villainess.
But with an uncanny ability of our MC that draws trouble like a magnet, can she rewrite the story?
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P.s. I don't want to reveal to readers(not in synopsis) that the MC herself is the omniscient reader who is transferred into the body of a villainess against a time-regressing heroine. Or else they might skip read the starting chapters (which took lots of rewrites/effort.?
Honestly, I want to tell the story starting from that note. So, cannot even yet those chapters. Guilty as charged.?)
It does read better now.
Here is mine
A girl woke up in a white room, with no memory of who she was. Yet she knew deep inside her held a power unlike anyone, represented by the markings, the tattoos of the Eight Pointed Star, given to her by an unknown force. With her power, endless possibilities were...
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Nice. I like it. No distortion, readable title.
Nice. Again, I like titles like this, where it functions as its name, a title. Something that gives a starting feeling for the story, what to expect and doesn't spoon-feed me what the story is about.
Short but also on point. It sets up the story and tells the reader if you want to know more, read it. It already makes me question what is the "Eight Pointed Star" but to learn it I would need to read the story. So nice again.
I won't touch upon the what-to-expect and disclaimer parts as those are not really part of the synopsis.
In order and fine. I expected a little more tags but it is all good.
I would number them. For multiple reason: It is easer to find a chapter and also many readers start a book when it has ample chapters. If they look down and see it is at "chapter 70" or something, they may pick it up to binge it.
Final thoughts:
- Hm... Sounds nice. You got my attention.
(This novel is currently under rewrite) Infinite stories unfolds as the creation of the Fiction Verse and evolves into something revolutionary. This series is an All-in-one Genre, everything can happen, even the things you've dreamed of, even the stories that never existed before, it will...
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Don't mind the synopsis, the mc wrote that
Nice. My only gripe is that the green-coloured part of the title is hard to read on the cover.
Nice. Again, I like titles like this, where it functions as its name, a title.
It paints an interesting story but you need to break it up. Make it multiple sentences as it is WAY too long to be one, continuous sentence. Also some words get repeated and it is too glaring. Like: "it was a blue mythical spirit resembling a blue little flame" one blue is enough, be it either a "blue mythical spirit" or a "blue little flame," we don't need both to be described as blue. It needs a little rework but not much.
I won't touch upon the what-to-expect and disclaimer parts as those are not really part of the synopsis.
In order and fine.
All good.
Final thoughts:
- Hm... Sounds nice. You got my attention.
