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[AliceShiki]

Character Sheet - Angelina "Anja" Noir

Gender​ Female​ Race​ Human​ Level​ 1 (0 / 200 EXP)​ Age​ 23​ Class​ Martial Artist​ Money​ 10G​ Appearance Backstory Anja was born in an alternate Earth universe where superheroes existed. Her mother was a bona-fide magical girl who embodied "Love and Justice". Her father was a renowned journalist who flew into dangerous warzones documenting crimes against humanity. She grew up intensely admiring her mother and other dazzling stars, and she spent much of her youth dreaming to be a superhero like her idols... However... years passed and she never gained any fantastic abilities. Utlimately, Anja turned out to be an unremarkable normal girl. Frustrated and unwilling to give up, she turned towards fighting with her fists — brute forcing her way into becoming a hero. Even though she knew it was stupid, her tenacity was undeniable. She trained obsessively until she won the Junior Olympics (non-superhero category) in mixed martial arts for for three consecutive years... until one day in high school, Anja came home and found out her mother had been killed in action. Upset in ways beyond describing — and angry at her own powerlessness — she quit sports entirely because she was dissatisfied about how slow it was taking her to her goal. Anja didn't just want to be a good athlete. She wanted to be fighting. She wanted to have the strength to determine her own fate, and she was willing to give everything up to get there. She wanted power. Lots of power. Somebody told her the Gate might hold the answer she was looking for. Personality In her younger years, "Angelina" might have been more feminine and idealistic, but when she realized that she wasn't ever going to be a Magical Girl like her mom — her personality took a huge pivot to the rough side. Forceful. Stubborn. Explosive. Anja consider the feminine side of herself a huge hassle, and her biology is annoying as fuck. She knows she needs to work three times as hard as the men to get the same results. But that never intimidated her before, and it isn't going to stop her now. Inventory Skills Item Description Backpack​ Good for traveling light​ Knuckle Gloves​ Delivers some added punch​ Utility Belt​ Useful to carrying stuff​ Skill Description Athleticism++​ World-class athletic ability (weakened)​ Martial Artist++​ World-class martial artist (weakened)​ Strong Aura​ Exudes a dangerous vibe of killing intent​

I married a journalist that stayed away from home the whole time, got a daughter that looked up to my suicidal job and decided to follow my footsteps even though she clearly wasn't capable of doing so, did not try to convince her otherwise, and then died in action while leaving her to tend to herself!? >.<

How much of a terrible mother can I be!? >.<

 

[ohko]

I married a journalist that stayed away from home the whole time, got a daughter that looked up to my suicidal job and decided to follow my footsteps even though she clearly wasn't capable of doing so, did not try to convince her otherwise, and then died in action while leaving her to tend to herself!? >.<

How much of a terrible mother can I be!? >.<

It's a little sad, but I actually always wanted to do a story where the protagonist is a daughter of a magical girl (mother) who doesn't have superpowers herself.

 

[Reciful]

Hi @Reciful Welcome! Remember to indicate on your character sheet how your character was nerfed -- particularly with the skills!

I edit Reciful skills & Character sheet I added traits which explains weak points.

Is it passable now?

Maybe I'll edit it more in the future?

 

[Feathers95]

do you guys think it would be good idea to encouage new players from now on to add the field "aspirations" or "ambitions" in their character sheets. so that it stands out, nothing long just a few words, or even one word, like " find love " or "revenge," "get rich", or my character would be something like "be a real knight".

That would be cute and good for character development but this isn't an actual roleplay so I don't really care if people add them or not lol

My characters do have aspirations though, Felicia wants to one day return to her original world and take revenge, whilst Zombo wants to explore and see everything the world has to offer. Both of their goals require them getting stronger, hence they're adventurers ^^

 

[AliceShiki]

It's a little sad, but I actually always wanted to do a story where the protagonist is a daughter of a magical girl (mother) who doesn't have superpowers herself.

Have fun~

 

[Bochi]

It's a little sad, but I actually always wanted to do a story where the protagonist is a daughter of a magical girl (mother) who doesn't have superpowers herself.

*Eyes glow in potential friend*

 

[ohko]

I edit Reciful skills & Character sheet I added traits which explains weak points.

Is it passable now?

Maybe I'll edit it more in the future?

It's a bit better! It's best to be a little bit more specific than saying it "occasionally" works.

The easiest way to put it is to say something like: "My character used to be able to do XXX, but ever since coming to Scribel it isn't working. However, with time, they might be able to figure out how to get it working again."

 

[Ddraig]

*Eyes glow in potential friend*

*Eyes glow in potential partner*

 

[LazyLonduf]

Finally caught up to the thread again ^^

Someone made a war god/asura chara, didn't they? Does that count?

It does for Oam! But it would depend on Oam if she would like a war god to be her patron. Moreover, if their level difference isn't that big, the inspiration would most likely not be very high.
From the world where Oam was from, the gods walked on the world, which is why even though there are many altars in Scribel, it is difficult to get a communion status.
Oam also knows better than to join any temple immediately. At most for now, she would help out with charity.

 

[AliceShiki]

It does for Oam! But it would depend on Oam if she would like a war god to be her patron. Moreover, if their level difference isn't that big, the inspiration would most likely not be very high.
From the world where Oam was from, the gods walked on the world, which is why even though there are many altars in Scribel, it is difficult to get a communion status.
Oam also knows better than to join any temple immediately. At most for now, she would help out with charity.

>.>
<.<

The War God/Asura member was a... Problem member of sorts... We don't talk about them too much... >.>

 

[LazyLonduf]

>.>
<.<

The War God/Asura member was a... Problem member of sorts... We don't talk about them too much... >.>

I see, i did search up their name and it was deleted.

 

[LazyLonduf]

If I may ask, what's the difference between evaluated and filed?

 

[Feathers95]

If I may ask, what's the difference between evaluated and filed?

Absolutely nothing lol

 

[AliceShiki]

Ah, @Bochi! Please tag it as appraised, I forgot to put that in the appraisal! >.<

... And sorry for failing it, I'm like... 95% sure you intended them to be actual bandits, but like... Nothing you put in the report made them feel like bandits, so I couldn't accept it! >.<

If I may ask, what's the difference between evaluated and filed?

Same thing! Appraised is also the same thing~

 

[Reciful]

It's a bit better! It's best to be a little bit more specific than saying it "occasionally" works.

The easiest way to put it is to say something like: "My character used to be able to do XXX, but ever since coming to Scribel it isn't working. However, with time, they might be able to figure out how to get it working again."

I'm a fan of Eldritch stories, Its my first time writing things like this, so I have no idea.

Just Please say if there anything else to change or advice... thanks again

 

[Feathers95]

I've always used 'Evaluated & Filed' for my spoilers, and now two people have asked about it, maybe it's time to change it xD

 

[LazyLonduf]

I've always used 'Evaluated & Filed' for my spoilers, and now two people have asked about it, maybe it's time to change it xD

Absolutely nothing lol

Ah, @Bochi! Please tag it as appraised, I forgot to put that in the appraisal! >.<

... And sorry for failing it, I'm like... 95% sure you intended them to be actual bandits, but like... Nothing you put in the report made them feel like bandits, so I couldn't accept it! >.<

Same thing! Appraised is also the same thing~

Wait, so is appraised, evaluated, and filed all mean it has been reviewed?

 

[Bochi]

Ah, @Bochi! Please tag it as appraised, I forgot to put that in the appraisal! >.<

... And sorry for failing it, I'm like... 95% sure you intended them to be actual bandits, but like... Nothing you put in the report made them feel like bandits, so I couldn't accept it! >.<

Same thing! Appraised is also the same thing~

I was actually going for that effect, so it would have been a bigger problem for me if you had accepted it, actually~

 

[Feathers95]

Wait, so is appraised, evaluated, and filed all mean it has been reviewed?

Yup! xD

 

[Moshi]

Wait, so is appraised, evaluated, and filed all mean it has been reviewed?

Yeah. Nobody ever really said what to put it as, so people just post whatever. It's fine as long as it's understood.