To edit or to not

TheMonotonePuppet

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I have edited my backlog a bunch of times, with multiple revisions. There are some plot inconsistencies created by poor descriptive choices.
I feel zero motivation to edit them, and just want to continue writing the story proper. Should I grit my teeth and edit them (since it could affect story writing flow) or should I continue writing?
 

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Personally, I think you can continue to write. If you go back to the backlog again and again, it will suck all the energy out of you and leave you a lifeless puppet. It would be better to finish the story and only then fix the errors at your own pace.
 

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It depends on the quality problems. If there are only small inconsistencies it should be fine, but if everything is just one giant plot hole, editing is needed. There is only so much you can fix after ending the story without rewriting everything.
 

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Just continue to write, you can always add bits in or even fix the slight inconsistencies later on.
What's the point in writing a story if it isn't full of errors anyways? :blob_teehee:
 

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I'm not an author, but I would say leaving too many or too big inconsistencies unadressed will push your readers away, as they won't wait however long it might take you for a hypothetical editing pass that might never come, but it will affect their enjoyement of the story.
On the other hand, I have also seen multiple cases where authors paused writing their story to do a thorough editing, only to disappear halfway through or move on to other projects.

So the answer should depend on why you are writing. If you are writing mainly for yourself, then by all means continue writing. Same if you want to monetize the story later, which would make the curent version just a draft. But if you are here for the view count and ratings, you might want to think about it more carefully.
 

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I don’t like editing before a novel is complete because, well, I don’t want to be paralyzed by the options. What I’m doing is just publishing and keeping track of feedback for a rewrite.

P.S. Would you like any help editing?
 

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Since you’re talking about the kind of changes to already-published chapters which could affect further writing… it might be useful to think about “editing” as a few different kinds of things:
  • Rewriting: starting over with the same story, doing it again.
  • Revising: almost rewriting, but leaves big chunks intact, moving them around or deleting, adding whole new sections to connect them better, changing the structure, altering order of events.
  • Polishing: going through and changing language and writing style to improve the quality, focus in on the style. Could be done without a rewrite, by reading (or listening to) sections and wincing, then redoing the awkward, bad or confusing parts
  • Tweaking: changing, adding or removing details because you no longer like them, or they conflict with a later part you’re writing. This is inevitable when “pantsing” or writing+publishing serially. You realize “oh wait, this character should have known about that event, and the reader should see their reaction” when you’re writing a later chapter. Or it’s as simple as thinking “wait it makes no sense for that character to bring a bow, they won’t be able to use it in the main combat coming up… should be changed to a sword.”
  • Proofing: just fixing grammar, spelling, punctuation mistakes, impossible-to-read sentences, etc.
It sounds like you’re talking about “tweaking” but a really big tweak could turn into revising. However, little tweaks… you could probably do them as you go, and then you might have more confidence to push forward with the leading edge of the story? That’s how I feel about it, at least; dealing with those little problems removes a nagging problem in the back of your mind and improves your overall writing pace.

However if they’re big enough that it would interrupt your writing, either don’t bother with them (most readers probably won’t notice) or break it down into smaller pieces and just tweak a little at a time. TLDR: just tweak, don’t revise, to maintain pace.

I badly want to polish & do some revision to the early chapters in my main series, but I’ve started to accept that I won’t be able to focus on that properly without pausing new chapters. For many writers I think it eventually gets to the point where thinking about new readers starting with the oldest chapters is too aggravating, and you have to hiatus + polish, revise or rewrite, in order of severity.
 

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Just continue to write, you can always add bits in or even fix the slight inconsistencies later on.
What's the point in writing a story if it isn't full of errors anyways? :blob_teehee:
i advocate this! i reused an older character (same world) and she mentioned she had 3 kids. my readers latched on IMMEDIATELY! "WAIT! SHE HAD TWO!"

enter the "mysterious background story that gets revealed later). so yeah, she went from having two living kids to having one that had passed away that she didn't like to talk about, and the mention of three kids was a slip of her tongue. TOTALLY not a slip of my own memory. lol
 
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I have edited my backlog a bunch of times, with multiple revisions. There are some plot inconsistencies created by poor descriptive choices.
I feel zero motivation to edit them, and just want to continue writing the story proper. Should I grit my teeth and edit them (since it could affect story writing flow) or should I continue writing?
That is why you should outline as you go. That way, you can catch the inconsistencies as they happen. But if you are a plotter, it would be a bit confusing having two outlines, so maybe name the note-taking outline with events, povs, clothes, food, etc. something other than outline. I say you should continue writing. But you know best what your story needs.
i advocate this! i reused an older character (same world) and she mentioned she had 3 kids. my readers latched on IMMEDIATELY! "WAIT! SHE HAD TWO!"

enter the "mysterious background story that gets revealed later). so yeah, she went from having two living kids to having one that had passed away that she didn't like to talk about, and the mention of three kids was a slip of her tongue. TOTALLY not a slip of my own memory. lol
I made a mistake as I was making the character sheet. I wrote cursed weapon instead of off-hand. Good thing that the people in the forum pointed it out. But I liked the idea of a cursed weapon as a second weapon, so I weaved it into the story. (And I will deny, to my dying day, that I didn't know the word for off-hand in German) XD.
 

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i advocate this! i reused an older character (same world) and she mentioned she had 3 kids. my readers latched on IMMEDIATELY! "WAIT! SHE HAD TWO!"

enter the "mysterious background story that gets revealed later). so yeah, she went from having two living kids to having one that had passed away that she didn't like to talk about, and the mention of three kids was a slip of her tongue. TOTALLY not a slip of my own memory. lol
Funny you should say this, had a very similar problem regarding counting dragons the other day.
Apparently counting to 9 is too difficult for me. :blob_facepalm: Caught it last second before posting but already made loads of little memory mistakes throughout it all.
You just hope you can catch the error before and if not, make a workaround that was most definitely planned and not made at the very last second! :blob_joy:
 
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I always edited as I went before, and eventually it sucked the life out of me. Complete a whole arc, or the entire story then go back and edit. Also might help to keep a master document with every chapter. When you correct a chapter, you also correct it on the master document.
 

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At least fix mistakes readers point out. Otherwise it seems like the writer doesn't care what readers think.
 
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The thing is that everybody has a process that works better for them. You can only try suggestions people put in this thread. By the way, if you posted the story already then yes you should probably edit. Or you can delay new chapters until you finish an arc.
 
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