My new Novel, help

[Rivertalon]

Hello everyone I am new.

If you are free please visit my novel and give a review. It doesn't matter if it's good or bad, just be honest. I believe this will help me improve my writing.

Reborn as a Goat [ A Progression Litrpg ]

Sakai Yuji had always aspired to control his own destiny and write his own story. One day, he found himself transported to a new world, one in which magic and cultivators were very real. Upon discovering that beast could speak, humans could fly, and immortals could live forever, Sakai Yuji...

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I didn't read everything yet, when I do I'll put a review.
The first thing I can say is that I like that the part of his death is short. Most novels has a chapter dedicated to the MC's death, which in the end, doesn't matter because his only motivation is to "live my life to the fullest"
On this novel though, it's shorter and it's explained through the character's POV
idk, maybe it's just my preference :-|

 

[Rivertalon]

I didn't read everything yet, when I do I'll put a review.
The first thing I can say is that I like that the part of his death is short. Most novels has a chapter dedicated to the MC's death, which in the end, doesn't matter because his only motivation is to "live my life to the fullest"
On this novel though, it's shorter and it's explained through the character's POV
idk, maybe it's just my preference :-|

Thx I'll wait for your review. It doesn't matter if it's good or bad.

 

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