Kenjona
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TL/DR
Yes.
Yes.
- I skip long series of Stats, I like LitRPG, to a degree and some others of that ilk, but the Stats can get annoyingly long. Love it when Authors hide it behind spoilers, so I can peruse it later if I want without ruining the chapter I am reading.
- Pages of angst that end up being more filler then actual content, or just not interesting do to the wordiness of the Author.
- Sex scenes that are not more than, I dominated X persona and they loved it. Or the descriptive techniques used is pathetic, repetitive; or even worse both repetitive and pathetic. I like sex scenes, but if your gonna include them at least rip off some good ones from somewhere else, if you cannot do more than write a variant of "slapped dat ass and they went ahego" every single sex scene.
- 1,000 word count lists of what the MC is doing and no plot or conflict involved.
Or call it finishing school.You can put all of the princesses on a reservation and call it a sovereign state.