CheertheSecond
The second coming of CheertheDead
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It's me again but this time I need help with certain translation and/or naming suggestion for martial arts and/or techniques.
Since I haven't seen a lot of wuxia or xuanxia focusing on kick techniques, I intend to target this area. You can also contribute any elaboration on the technique. I really need suggestion to make it diverse.
Most of the Chinese names were thought by my friends but we aren't really sure on the translation since it felt a bit odd.
This one is about a technique that was not concerning kicks. What would be your comment on this? Do you want to add anything to it?
Tou Gu Yan Zhang
[Pierce/through] [Bone] [Fire/Flame] [Palm strike]
Bone-piercing scorching palm strike / Scorching palm for short (not sure if this translation is the best. Recommend?)
While also generating heat like Fire Dragon Martial Art, this technique concentrates heat inside the user’s body. When needed, the martial artist can release this heat through a palm strike that flies and penetrates the enemy’s body. The introduced heat will turn the enemy into boiling liquid. Due to this palm strike producing no visible features while it was in the air, it was also known as the Invisible Flame. The flying speed of this palm strike is exceptionally fast. Unless the opponent correctly predicted they would be hit by this technique and moved to evade beforehand, most of the time it will hit.
Because of the piercing nature of this technique, only an incredibly sturdy qi defense can stop this technique from penetrating too deep into the body.
For all of its advantages, it has a weakness. This technique took a great amount of effort to prepare for each strike. In battles against swift opponents, the user usually unleashes the premature version of this technique.
The next one is a series of martial art with hardness as their property. I was trying to differentiate them from each other. I still unsure what to do with the Iron Head one.
Since I haven't seen a lot of wuxia or xuanxia focusing on kick techniques, I intend to target this area. You can also contribute any elaboration on the technique. I really need suggestion to make it diverse.
Most of the Chinese names were thought by my friends but we aren't really sure on the translation since it felt a bit odd.
- Rock-smashing feet - Fighting art with short burst of strong attacks. Due to its inability to produce a good follow-up, the fighting style usually carries out in a sequence: [spot the target - get in range - shoot - back out - ready - repeat]. Its merits are breaking through guard with little difficulty and quite hard to dodge unless the opponent accurately pinpoints the intent of the practitioner and moves before the smashing foot start firing. Wouldn't be strange to compare this fighting style with a short-range bolt-action rifle.
- 乾 坤 轮 连 踋 (Universe cycling chain kick???) - By spinning the body, the practitioner also spins the legs, creating cycling circles of kicks. One kick follows another, the low kick moving to the top while the top moving down as in heaven becaming earth and vice versa. The weakness and strength lie in these spins. If the spin is interrupted, it loses its power.
- ??? - A fighting art inspired by the robust and aggressiveness of gamebirds during the fighting fowl sport. It lacks springiness in its properties, the same for Rock-smashing feet. However, it can have very nice follow-ups into a big combo, unlike the mentioned rock-smashing feet.
- ??? - Kicking martial art that emphasizes on precision. The practitioners can unleash over ten kicks landing on the same target (for example a shoulder) while the opponent was moving without losing balance. This style usually begins with the practitioner picking a target (could be a weakness that they assume) then accumulating damage by attacking only that one spot to wear down the opponent. Among the kick arts introduced here, users of this fighting art move the least during combat. Usually seen standing on one leg.
- ??? - A fighting style that requires highly flexible legs. The practitioners can utilize their toes and joints to grapple with their opponent. Majority of the techniques in this martial art have both legs off the ground. Hence, onlookers usually witness the practitioners of this art being on the air or standing on their hands. It is also the springiest style. The practitioners are always ready on the move to dodge the enemy. If the disciple of the 4th style can attack anywhere, then the student of the 5th style can attack from anywhere (during the fall, on the air, on the ground, in middle of being hit, etc.).
- ??? - Kicking style with a central rhythm / pattern. The opponent may feel like they were fighting against tidal waves. Each wave/pattern might be slightly off in comparison to the last. By configuring their rhythm, disciples of the art can create infinite combination of pattern with attacks coming from any angle at any interval they see fit. Due to the vast amount of possibility, it was very hard to guess and perfectly counter those. Typically way of dealing with this style is to break the rhythm midway with a good and sizable assault. Of course, dragging the fight into a war of attrition could also work as long as you are better at the defense game.
- ??? - A new art that combines the first 5 styles. It does not have the edge of any of these types (not as powerful as the Rock-smashing, not continuously as the 2nd style, not as aggressive as the 3rd, not as precise as the 4th, or as flexible as the 5th), but it was more rounded. It has tools for almost every situation as well as easier to learn. In return, its stats are mostly average.
This one is about a technique that was not concerning kicks. What would be your comment on this? Do you want to add anything to it?
Tou Gu Yan Zhang
[Pierce/through] [Bone] [Fire/Flame] [Palm strike]
Bone-piercing scorching palm strike / Scorching palm for short (not sure if this translation is the best. Recommend?)
While also generating heat like Fire Dragon Martial Art, this technique concentrates heat inside the user’s body. When needed, the martial artist can release this heat through a palm strike that flies and penetrates the enemy’s body. The introduced heat will turn the enemy into boiling liquid. Due to this palm strike producing no visible features while it was in the air, it was also known as the Invisible Flame. The flying speed of this palm strike is exceptionally fast. Unless the opponent correctly predicted they would be hit by this technique and moved to evade beforehand, most of the time it will hit.
Because of the piercing nature of this technique, only an incredibly sturdy qi defense can stop this technique from penetrating too deep into the body.
For all of its advantages, it has a weakness. This technique took a great amount of effort to prepare for each strike. In battles against swift opponents, the user usually unleashes the premature version of this technique.
The next one is a series of martial art with hardness as their property. I was trying to differentiate them from each other. I still unsure what to do with the Iron Head one.
- Diamond Reinforcement - It is similar to Golden Body but it is not a body refinement technique and therefore in need of qi to use. It is therefore limited by the quality of the user’s qi. Meanwhile, Golden Body can be built although at slower rate by weaker qi.
- Indestructible Golden Body/ Golden Body - Focus on the inside, it grows from your bone to the outermost layer of your skin. It can be said to be a technique that aims to further improve your already reformed body to make it even stronger physically. When complete, the entire body is truly transformed and no longer needs qi to maintain its hardness.
- Iron Cloth/ Iron shirt/ Iron Armour - Focus on making a layer of qi armour around the body. It is similar to the qi armour from cultivating. This martial arts study deeply into this process to master the technique of creating qi armour as well as refining the qi armour. It also allows the creation of multiple qi armours being in the same space as each other rather than on top of each other like normal.
- Iron Head - Being more offensive-oriented than defensive in comparison to the Iron Armour?