Litrptree reviews please? First-time writer here.

[LitrpgBird]

Recently I channeled all of my boredom and typing skills into Soultree, my first book. My problem arises in that I need feedback really badly because I have no idea how to write.
Soultree
Currently releasing a chapter every Wednesday.

 

[melchi]

First thing I would suggest is don't publish a chapter that is less than 1500 words.

 

[LitrpgBird]

First thing I would suggest is don't publish a chapter that is less than 1500 words.

That sounds reasonable.

 

[Deleted member 68927]

Recently I channeled all of my boredom and typing skills into Soultree, my first book. My problem arises in that I need feedback really badly because I have no idea how to write.
Soultree
Currently releasing a chapter every Wednesday.

Don't stretch the chapters pass their ending. No one likes filler. 1k words is a good chapter length. People tuned in every day when I posted 1k word chapters. In contrast, when I used to post 5k length chapters, people told me they were walls of text.

The reader is capable of binging a 100k word story in a day. But not when it is all in like 20 chapters or so. Find your style and stick to it.

Happy writing!

 

[greyblob]

chapters are too short. there's also very little to form a review.

 

[LitrpgBird]

Don't stretch the chapters pass their ending. No one likes filler. 1k words is a good chapter length. People tuned in every day when I posted 1k word chapters. In contrast, when I used to post 5k length chapters, people told me they were walls of text.

The reader is capable of binging a 100k word story in a day. But not when it is all in like 20 chapters or so. Find your style and stick to it.

Happy writing!

Thanks for the tips! I'm going to start posting 2 1k chapters a week.