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[Quixotic]

Hello, I would love it if you could leave feedback on my story. And indicate to me what would be better to improve.

It’s Scary When Things Work Out

After a car accident, I wake up in an unfamiliar apartment, plagued by memories that aren't my own. They belong to Elanora, a girl who has experienced deep loss and struggled with strained relationships. The memories reveal her harrowing encounter with three individuals who coerced her into...

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[TheMonotonePuppet]

Hello, I would love it if you could leave feedback on my story. And indicate to me what would be better to improve.

It’s Scary When Things Work Out

After a car accident, I wake up in an unfamiliar apartment, plagued by memories that aren't my own. They belong to Elanora, a girl who has experienced deep loss and struggled with strained relationships. The memories reveal her harrowing encounter with three individuals who coerced her into...

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I would love to! Would you be open to having a quid pro quo of feedback, where we can comment on each other's stories on the comment section below, and provide feedback here?

 

[phaeous]

Hello, I would love it if you could leave feedback on my story. And indicate to me what would be better to improve.

It’s Scary When Things Work Out

After a car accident, I wake up in an unfamiliar apartment, plagued by memories that aren't my own. They belong to Elanora, a girl who has experienced deep loss and struggled with strained relationships. The memories reveal her harrowing encounter with three individuals who coerced her into...

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I got the impression in the original chapter that the hero-consciousness was a masculine girl

but then you said at the end it was a boy

so i couldn't enjoy the next chapter

 

[Notadate]

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